for Desperate Times Desperate Measures3/20/2009 c1 
3Balliett
even the second time around i love it. it's SPECTACULAR. you can feel the atmosphere of the concert pressing in around the characters. the audience is alive~!
mmnyeahwell. those best-friends-in-love relationships are always oh so complicated. i particularly like the ending: being all touchy-feely while his girlfriend (or ex, whatever) is sleeping in the back. how naughty~! (;
3Ballietteven the second time around i love it. it's SPECTACULAR. you can feel the atmosphere of the concert pressing in around the characters. the audience is alive~!
mmnyeahwell. those best-friends-in-love relationships are always oh so complicated. i particularly like the ending: being all touchy-feely while his girlfriend (or ex, whatever) is sleeping in the back. how naughty~! (;
11/17/2008 c1 sweetcatastrophes
i had to review just because i fucking love underoath. and im jealous that you went to a concert.
the but peice itself was excellent. the characters ere very real and believable. keep up the great work!
i had to review just because i fucking love underoath. and im jealous that you went to a concert.
the but peice itself was excellent. the characters ere very real and believable. keep up the great work!