for fractures7/30/2009 c2 
173Little girl Big world
I like this piece I feel I can relate to parts of it.
A lot said in these two lines. Well done!
173Little girl Big worldI like this piece I feel I can relate to parts of it.
A lot said in these two lines. Well done!
11/25/2008 c11 91fairytale failure
I love the repetition of the motifs in the hotel room, and how you used almost the same words from the prologue in the epilogue. The prologue was one of my favourite parts, because it was just so cute, and I also liked how you kept referring to the stars as below.
91fairytale failureI love the repetition of the motifs in the hotel room, and how you used almost the same words from the prologue in the epilogue. The prologue was one of my favourite parts, because it was just so cute, and I also liked how you kept referring to the stars as below.
11/3/2008 c6 she smolders
That last sentence is so original and such an interesting idea. I just read all this right now but it's that line stands out for me the most. I really love how simple, short phrases strung together can sound deep and amazing and insightful. Take care.
That last sentence is so original and such an interesting idea. I just read all this right now but it's that line stands out for me the most. I really love how simple, short phrases strung together can sound deep and amazing and insightful. Take care.
10/20/2008 c7 233siphoned afterglow
time mach3
i love the first line.
sorry, that was a completely hopeless review.
Is all of this true or was it conjured from the inner folds of your imagination?
233siphoned afterglowtime mach3
i love the first line.
sorry, that was a completely hopeless review.
Is all of this true or was it conjured from the inner folds of your imagination?
10/20/2008 c5 siphoned afterglow
Time MAchine 2
-oh, thats sad. That happens a lot to me. I have this crazy lovely happy experiance with somebody and after awhile, it isn't there anymore. or they've just gone away.
:( :)
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yeah yeah, i'm pretty much jobless.
plus, i like these tiny fractures
Time MAchine 2
-oh, thats sad. That happens a lot to me. I have this crazy lovely happy experiance with somebody and after awhile, it isn't there anymore. or they've just gone away.
:( :)
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yeah yeah, i'm pretty much jobless.
plus, i like these tiny fractures
10/20/2008 c3 siphoned afterglow
On time machine:
i like the idea of being so volatile. 'Volatile' is my favorite word at the moment ;)
i like the crazy impulsiveness. love the first line.
On time machine:
i like the idea of being so volatile. 'Volatile' is my favorite word at the moment ;)
i like the crazy impulsiveness. love the first line.
10/20/2008 c2 siphoned afterglow
the piece shell makes me think of this one friend I have. Lately, we've been fighting a lot. There is this distance that has been formed and its very painful. The second line sort of radiates the same thought process I have-that maybe one day everything will be okay again.
the piece shell makes me think of this one friend I have. Lately, we've been fighting a lot. There is this distance that has been formed and its very painful. The second line sort of radiates the same thought process I have-that maybe one day everything will be okay again.
10/20/2008 c1 10PaintingTheSkyRed
Awe this is really sad but really well written. I am most def favoriting you and this. c:
10PaintingTheSkyRedAwe this is really sad but really well written. I am most def favoriting you and this. c: