for The Werewolf1/18/2009 c1 
24Elennar
Hi there!
I liked the way you crafted this poem. It was simply done, minus any frills and the such. However, you might want to work a little bit on the flow.It seemed a little staccato to me when I read it. Also, I think that the word is 'belied'.
All in all, a nice little poem.
Sincerely
Caramir
(By the way, be sure to check out the Review Marathon- link in my profile)
24ElennarHi there!
I liked the way you crafted this poem. It was simply done, minus any frills and the such. However, you might want to work a little bit on the flow.It seemed a little staccato to me when I read it. Also, I think that the word is 'belied'.
All in all, a nice little poem.
Sincerely
Caramir
(By the way, be sure to check out the Review Marathon- link in my profile)