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10/22/2008 c1 Isca
"That break in flakes upon a winter wind,

And flutter, faint, their nectar bled to ice."

That first line is absolutely brilliant!

The second line paints lovely imagery :)

You always write such lovely Sonnets!
10/22/2008 c1 24ilovetheopera
Easy and pleasant to read. I enjoyed your descriptions and your phrasing thoroughly, but when read aloud, at some times the meter and rhythm seemed a little off. However, I cannot remember if the technical requirements of sonnets involved them having a strict meter, so, just a comment.

As far as I'm concerned, this is the best thing I've read on FP today, and I also enjoyed it to boot. Good job.

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