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3/2/2005 c1 16Wing Chant
*dances with joy* I love this story as well! Yayness! You just love your writing style! =D Yay!

I thought it was interesting to have your character have a dream about her Grandpa's death, but even more tragic when it actually happened. But, hey, people say that they have dreams like that sometimes. Like about their plane blowing up, so they don't go on it just in case. And what happens? The plane blows up. XD I guess they couldn't do anything about her Grandpa dying though. Espicially, if her parents didn't respect her. =(

loserz. ;)
3/10/2004 c1 7Winterheart
Wow, an incredible story. You write very clearly, it's easy to understand but in no way boring. I think you have the beginnings of a great writer, to say the least. Please, continue...
3/29/2003 c1 7Shelti M
Good L- erm, I mean, wow. Uplifting really, this story is. A little tragic, true, but still very interesting and wonderfully written. Although you never elaborated on that 'footsteps in the bathroom' thing. I was hoping that was important. Oh well. Overall, a great story.

And thank you so much for your reviews on my poems! I love getting reviews from you; they're so… deep and thought provoking. Somehow. Thank you!
3/15/2003 c1 Yuffie.K
A sad story with a tinge of sweet sorrow in it. I cannot say to have such a similar experience,all i do is dream occasionally about irrelevent stuff in the future - nothing like yours. Yet, I'm not a religous person... my dreams lead me to believe in fate and destiny... why do these things happen? No one has a clue, and we can only guess...
2/19/2003 c1 Needa S
Excellent! God works in mysterious ways! God came into my life after my brother died. He had always been there but it took my brothers death to open my eyes. I am now a Christian. Sorry, I never meant to go on and on Good job! Keep writing..
11/8/2002 c1 12Dawn I. Cambridge
Eh... it's okay. A little boring, though...
6/12/2002 c1 34Sparkles-Chan
Amen
5/7/2002 c1 Naeginnie6 who is inevitably not logged in A-hem
Oh. That was really touching. I like it a lot... muy bien!
4/28/2002 c1 122Mistress Jakira
This is marvelous...is it true? I know everyone's asked that, but like someone before me said, it's so honest that it just doesn't seem to be totally fictitious. And the inclusion of God is something I really like-I see so many people crying out how they don't believe in God anymore, and it's nice to see that not everyone does that. It never ceases to make me smile when I see that.

I really couldn't say the right thing to put this story to justice, so I won't try...but you're really an amazing writer, and I hope you continue to do what you do. :) Keep it up! ~MJ
4/22/2002 c1 20Cassandra Anthemyst
is this a true story? it's so honest, i can't believe that it isn't true. thanks for sharing it, it was very inspirational
3/6/2002 c1 2Undraya
so sad-and interesting! you really explained much of the character as if it were you...hmmm...good characters with their feelings and personality, good plot with all the grieve in it and all the realization of learning the best about the world-and God.
3/3/2002 c1 195ReaDiNGS DaRK RoSe
i know i sound really stupid but is this tru? because if it is WOW!

it doesnt matter though it was fanftstic! amazing really good well done and thank you for all the great reviews on my fics and poetry and stuff!

Jami xxx
2/16/2002 c1 7Snowlily
Wow... that was... just wonderful.
1/31/2002 c1 LittleMaggie
That was beautiful. . . it felt like I was there living through it all too. When my grandfather died two months ago I was devastated. This is so beautiful in explaining the feelings that go through a person like a riptide effect. . . I'm glad its all okay for you now. I'm sorry about your grandfather. I know how it feels. Is this seriously a true story?
1/25/2002 c1 8Raonaid Luckwell
This is a deep topic you took on {well to me that is}. Very well done I'm very impressed
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