Reviews: looking at your feet and finding yourself

for looking at your feet and finding yourself

11/2/2008 c1

4Lux d'Marcs
Interesting; very atomospheric. Stanzas 1,2,6, and 7 are my favorites.

10/23/2008 c1

260gg. lass
this poem is beautiful. i love the imagery.

amazing wording as well.

yours until the wind changes,

gg

10/23/2008 c1

1596NESSA
Wow that was awesome poem! Nice writing, but what I'm wondering is what were you thinking about when you write this exactly. Or maybe you weren't thinking and the words just came out, that happens a lot to me. Anyway keep writing.

10/23/2008 c1

190Manifest-Destiny-x X
This is flawless!