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8/17/2015 c1 2Geekly Chic Chick
Sounds like you have a tough life! Wish I could help you, but I don't know you! I hope you can work it out.
7/2/2009 c1 2I Am Dreamer
True events, huh? No wonder it felt so real. :) This is so much fun to read when I'm also having the same experience. Crushing is just ridiculous, right? Yet we all love doing it. I love your writing. Very flowing.

Keep on pwning!
1/16/2009 c1 2CrossMyHeart
ha good story. i thought it was longer so i went to scroll down and i was like "AHH! ITS NOT THERE!" its so weird having to press the shift and period key to get the speech brackets! Gah!


Oh, and by the way, Gaspard is so my lover.

Mine. Rawr.
1/4/2009 c1 Michelle
Only have time for a short review because I have to run- two sentences that need fixing: "we've ever talked anymore". Tke out the anymore, it doesn't make sense. Also, in the third paragraph (I think) she says she's shy and outspoken. Huh?

Okay, sorry to leave such an abrubt review. i did like it, but i have to go! Luv ya!
1/3/2009 c1 Chancee
Geez, how the love sick teenagers of the world have a similar crush experience. Very well written. Since it is based upon true events then what else can be said except you delivered it well. I see you reference Twilight a lot. I love that saga too. I read all four books within five weeks. Edward is just too dang perfect, but the story is still awesome!
11/23/2008 c1 1Zen Arcade
your profile said you needed feedback, so here i am. :O

that wasnt anything outstanding. it was kinda like a typical livejournal-xanga blog entry or something, but it's raw and full of pure emotion, and that made it somewhat powerful.
10/25/2008 c1 13blurrylights
This was really good! What ended up happening to you and the guy? You did an awesome job...great work!
10/25/2008 c1 1Narcoleptica06
this explains my life.

nut i enjoy the story so far.

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