for Dance with the Devil10/28/2008 c1 XxSiennaxX
Oh, I really like this so far. Alik seems a tad cruel.
I'd really like to know what happens ASAP - I'm kinda impatient, especially when there is a cliffhanger
Update soon please?
:D
Oh, I really like this so far. Alik seems a tad cruel.
I'd really like to know what happens ASAP - I'm kinda impatient, especially when there is a cliffhanger
Update soon please?
:D
10/26/2008 c1 
2TheKatsPajamas
WOOHOO! Another vampire story to read. Lol.
A little creepy? More like off his rocker, haha.
Wonder how Elizabeth is gonna react to this...
Cant wait for the next installment.
=]
-JRG
2TheKatsPajamasWOOHOO! Another vampire story to read. Lol.
A little creepy? More like off his rocker, haha.
Wonder how Elizabeth is gonna react to this...
Cant wait for the next installment.
=]
-JRG
10/26/2008 c1 Twist Their Emotions
This is very well written. I believe you'll get a good response to this. Sure, this story has been done before, but it's usually terribly written. If you make it original, I'm on board.
This is very well written. I believe you'll get a good response to this. Sure, this story has been done before, but it's usually terribly written. If you make it original, I'm on board.
10/26/2008 c1 pinkeclipse
so her friends are in on this mate thing? please continue writing! i would love to read more!
so her friends are in on this mate thing? please continue writing! i would love to read more!
10/25/2008 c1 hopelessy hopless romantic
plz plz plz don't scrap! this story has such good potential! I love already! please update!
plz plz plz don't scrap! this story has such good potential! I love already! please update!
10/25/2008 c1 ArmedScribbles
its very interesting and original. please dont scrap it
update soon please!
its very interesting and original. please dont scrap it
update soon please!
10/25/2008 c1 breathless night
Hell no dont scrap this story. The begining is really good.
Oh i cant wait to find out wat happens between Elizabeth and
Alik can i say DRAMA. Screw tat u dont need a beta!
I cant wait for chapter 2
PS: Update soon plz ;D!
Hell no dont scrap this story. The begining is really good.
Oh i cant wait to find out wat happens between Elizabeth and
Alik can i say DRAMA. Screw tat u dont need a beta!
I cant wait for chapter 2
PS: Update soon plz ;D!
10/25/2008 c1 TrishAH wndrlnd
No need to scrap it, you're off to a great start. Plus I like your writing style. And despite the fact that I am typically not a fan of this genre, I'm interested in reading more.
Trish
No need to scrap it, you're off to a great start. Plus I like your writing style. And despite the fact that I am typically not a fan of this genre, I'm interested in reading more.
Trish
10/25/2008 c1 Rose
This is a great beginning. NO! don't scrap it !=.=
This is a great beginning. NO! don't scrap it !=.=
10/25/2008 c1 1Donna So
hell no don't scrap this and screw beta bcuz i'm wrose wit my grammar and yet i have these people loving my stories.
anyways, i love your's. it's really interesting and something i never read before. please update.
1Donna Sohell no don't scrap this and screw beta bcuz i'm wrose wit my grammar and yet i have these people loving my stories.
anyways, i love your's. it's really interesting and something i never read before. please update.
10/25/2008 c1 Freakish Idiot
Hmm... it's an interesting start. I'd certainly be willing to read some more.
I just have one little question, or rather... I thought of something, its not really a question. OK, here it is. In the beginning of the chapter, Elizabeth seems to be... very focused on the 'otherworld' and its creatures. After realizing that, you'd think she'd jump at the thought that Alik is not human. Wouldn't she be freaking out? Especially if there was a murder involved? Or maybe she'd be a little angrier at the end? But what in the hell do I know.
She was angry at the end, and at the beginning of the next chapter you could shut me up pretty easily.
I just wanted to get my thoughts out.
I'll be waiting for some more. Update when you can.
Hmm... it's an interesting start. I'd certainly be willing to read some more.
I just have one little question, or rather... I thought of something, its not really a question. OK, here it is. In the beginning of the chapter, Elizabeth seems to be... very focused on the 'otherworld' and its creatures. After realizing that, you'd think she'd jump at the thought that Alik is not human. Wouldn't she be freaking out? Especially if there was a murder involved? Or maybe she'd be a little angrier at the end? But what in the hell do I know.
She was angry at the end, and at the beginning of the next chapter you could shut me up pretty easily.
I just wanted to get my thoughts out.
I'll be waiting for some more. Update when you can.