for Dance with the Devil10/27/2010 c17 andi1624
This was an awesome story; perfect mix of romance, action, and mystery. I hope you are able to write an epilogue because the ending is very abrupt and you left a lot of loose ends.
This was an awesome story; perfect mix of romance, action, and mystery. I hope you are able to write an epilogue because the ending is very abrupt and you left a lot of loose ends.
10/26/2010 c17 Jixnce
I hope you do write an epilogue - I found your story very interesting! ^^
I liked it a lot; it seems kind of like a paranormal romance, the kind that is a part of a long series. :)
I hope you do write an epilogue - I found your story very interesting! ^^
I liked it a lot; it seems kind of like a paranormal romance, the kind that is a part of a long series. :)
10/2/2010 c1 
2PassionateDemonLover
I read the whole story and it is awesome! I couldn't stop readig it ad I hope you make more like it!
2PassionateDemonLoverI read the whole story and it is awesome! I couldn't stop readig it ad I hope you make more like it!
9/30/2010 c17 8DorkExpress
OMG!
I loved your story!
It was great && man did you had me hooked!
Great story!
XOXO
8DorkExpressOMG!
I loved your story!
It was great && man did you had me hooked!
Great story!
XOXO
9/24/2010 c11 1Moon-Stone-Angel
slight correction. I think the name is the demon is actually Malphas. Obviously its just a typo on your part. Just thought I'd let you know.
1Moon-Stone-Angelslight correction. I think the name is the demon is actually Malphas. Obviously its just a typo on your part. Just thought I'd let you know.
9/19/2010 c17 2midnight989
OMG, I love love love love LOVE this story! Please write an epilogue, I don't want to say good bye to these wonderful characters yet! Very good job!
2midnight989OMG, I love love love love LOVE this story! Please write an epilogue, I don't want to say good bye to these wonderful characters yet! Very good job!
9/17/2010 c17 random
*wipes away tear* best story evr:):)
*wipes away tear* best story evr:):)
9/12/2010 c17 Verasque
This culminated to such a dear, sweet end. That second scene of the last chapter was amazingly intense and tender and all the swoon-worthy things that have made this endeavor so fun and great to be able to follow. Alik has developed as a character as much as the story has, and I think that's a solid nod to you. You've grown so much as a writer; and it was all YOUR doing. I hope that you can look back now and find that the goals you first spoke to me about have been fulfilled as best possible.
Here's to Liz and Alik, and all your other writing projects to come.
This culminated to such a dear, sweet end. That second scene of the last chapter was amazingly intense and tender and all the swoon-worthy things that have made this endeavor so fun and great to be able to follow. Alik has developed as a character as much as the story has, and I think that's a solid nod to you. You've grown so much as a writer; and it was all YOUR doing. I hope that you can look back now and find that the goals you first spoke to me about have been fulfilled as best possible.
Here's to Liz and Alik, and all your other writing projects to come.
9/8/2010 c17 Dash
Lovely story. You have a cool way of writing.
Lovely story. You have a cool way of writing.
9/8/2010 c17 C.Turtle
Hey,
This is probaly on eof the first stories that i have read in a while that is just damn good...
This is an unbelievable story... the content and the way it is structured just makes the story more readable...
Keep continuing writing because you have the genes for it...
C.Turtle
Hey,
This is probaly on eof the first stories that i have read in a while that is just damn good...
This is an unbelievable story... the content and the way it is structured just makes the story more readable...
Keep continuing writing because you have the genes for it...
C.Turtle