for My Father's Secret10/26/2008 c1 
3BayouBelle13
I really like this and think that it will go far if you continue it. What time period is this? The way your word things make me think that its modern, but sometimes you make it sound like this is in an older time. Also, watch your spelling. I really liked it and can't wait to read more!
3BayouBelle13I really like this and think that it will go far if you continue it. What time period is this? The way your word things make me think that its modern, but sometimes you make it sound like this is in an older time. Also, watch your spelling. I really liked it and can't wait to read more!