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3/29/2010 c8 1Cantata
I like this story. The bickering between Frix and Sarabeth makes me giggle, as well as the wolf's reactions to the two. The story is unique and I particularly like your own personal twist on the oh-so-well-known Beauty & the Beast story. Your scenario kind of makes me think of Corpse Bride, in the idea that everything's dead...but not. If you know what I mean. Yet this only makes it more interesting, especially since I haven't seen something like this before. I'm looking forward to an update on this, and I hope it continues to be as interesting and well-written as it currently is!
11/23/2009 c8 1Alicia Davis
this is a very good story! please update! I would love to read more!
8/22/2009 c8 1XxXevening-starXxX
I liked this chapter/story interesting take. Im curious to know what the deal is with her brother as in the whole eye buisness. Oh and why for no apparent reason why he and that wolf ran off into the forest leaving her behind. Anyway looking forward to when you update this story!
7/17/2009 c8 Amaranth
I knew her brother was dead! how much fun this is... :D and I love the random hatred (and thoughts of torture) she feels for Mr. Skeleton (whom I assume is the prince). Might that be because she is possibly related to the lady who placed the curse? Or just as a precaution on any alive female that comes near, to keep from breaking said curse?



You must return and write more! Please don't leave this story to die, it's too much fun... :(

Come back soon and I will give you coffees! XD
7/17/2009 c7 Amaranth
...Would that mysterious cold 'him' be the prince? I don' know, I don' know... XD
7/17/2009 c6 Amaranth
No, I didn't think the wolf was the prince, because in the prologue the sorceress changes him into something quite different. I'm waiting anxiously to see just what shape he takes. XD I figured the wolf was only meant to take them to the castle. And I suspect, in the 'Land of Death,' that dear Frix is already dead. :/ I'll just have to continue and see...
7/17/2009 c5 Amaranth
Feisty chapter, ne? I do hope you pinky has re-attached itself nicely. :p

I like your wording very much. I also like that you've made the girl a non-heroine type. It's more fun to watch her freak out at crazy things, rather than take it all in stride. Much more believable. ;)

Anyways, enough blabbering and I'll be off to the next lovely chappie... :D
7/17/2009 c4 Amaranth
Very strange that they blamed the twins so quickly for the wolf-creatures appearance, especially when it took their father's life along with all the other men/animals. I'll just have to wait and find more details...! :p
7/17/2009 c3 Amaranth
...And so, the plot thickens! XD
7/17/2009 c2 Amaranth
I like the hints of their magic ability. I think I like Frix best. His antics make me laugh, earning strange looks from my co workers. :p
7/17/2009 c1 Amaranth
Lovely!

Very nice title. :)
6/28/2009 c8 Mai ID
o very nice story so far! i hope you update soon!
6/28/2009 c1 Mai ID
very nice prologue! it definitely caught my interest!
6/19/2009 c8 hoptart
I decided to read this story of yours too. I don't really have much to say, except that I want answers...now! Come on and update, you know you want to.

:) cat
6/8/2009 c8 3FireRam
Wow, this story is so very mature. I think that this chapter sounds even better than the last! I can't wait to read what happends next. I also very much like the corpse idea and how only the dead can see the truly dead. Very nice. I hope you up date this story soon!

~FireRam
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