for Sins, Not Tragedies10/28/2008 c2 River-NZ
I liked this chapter too, but it wasn't as good as the first one. It was a little too short and at the start I got a little confused about who was telling the story, since it was a different character to who was telling the first chapter, but it never really said that.
I can't wait to see more chapters though, so keep writing =]
I liked this chapter too, but it wasn't as good as the first one. It was a little too short and at the start I got a little confused about who was telling the story, since it was a different character to who was telling the first chapter, but it never really said that.
I can't wait to see more chapters though, so keep writing =]
10/28/2008 c1 River-NZ
I like this first chapter. =]
There's a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing too major.
I can't wait to find out more about the characters etc. Good writing.
I like this first chapter. =]
There's a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing too major.
I can't wait to find out more about the characters etc. Good writing.