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11/2/2008 c1 56Luna Turner
I thought it was a little choppy and lacked rhythm. Some lines rhymed, and some lines didn't. It threw me off and I couldn't decide whether or not you meant to rhyme or it just happened.

Although, I did like the purpose/topic of this piece.

~Luna Turner

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