
7/5/2018 c1 Guest
Hilarious!
Hilarious!
7/30/2010 c1
1nanakathleen
Well, I am guessing what is true .
I was very confused for the first three quarters of the story, and then I was like "oh, she's from the UK..." and you have no idea how much of a difference it is from the US.
Lovely story line, Pepper actually describes me in a nutshell personality wise... and negatively, in the future don't use so many exclamation marks, it makes a story look less sophisticated no matter what the material.

Well, I am guessing what is true .
I was very confused for the first three quarters of the story, and then I was like "oh, she's from the UK..." and you have no idea how much of a difference it is from the US.
Lovely story line, Pepper actually describes me in a nutshell personality wise... and negatively, in the future don't use so many exclamation marks, it makes a story look less sophisticated no matter what the material.
4/12/2010 c1
7flyingpencil
This was really good!
And absolutely hilarious. The part were she asks him if he's calling her fat is just hilarious, even tough it would never happen in real life (maybe I shouldn't speak so fast...) I loved this story!

This was really good!
And absolutely hilarious. The part were she asks him if he's calling her fat is just hilarious, even tough it would never happen in real life (maybe I shouldn't speak so fast...) I loved this story!
4/21/2009 c1 taco
Dude you are an AMAZING writer! I seriously cried at this, but I guess I'm like Pepper in that because I was laughing, too. I really, really, REALLY wish this wasn't a one shot!
Dude you are an AMAZING writer! I seriously cried at this, but I guess I'm like Pepper in that because I was laughing, too. I really, really, REALLY wish this wasn't a one shot!
11/26/2008 c1
2CamilleBelle
I loved it, really cute and sweet.
I haven't read a story like it yet,
but again, I don't mind, I love cliches!

I loved it, really cute and sweet.
I haven't read a story like it yet,
but again, I don't mind, I love cliches!