for The PainGiver's Thoughts3/30/2009 c1 
6Kalista Jia
I like how it flows
So that when they dissipate,
The stars glimmer all the more brightly
On the surface of your memories.
It is short but the message is delivered. Nice.
6Kalista JiaI like how it flows
So that when they dissipate,
The stars glimmer all the more brightly
On the surface of your memories.
It is short but the message is delivered. Nice.
10/29/2008 c1 17Unique1952
I usually prefer pieces that are a little longer, but I think that the length coupled with your choice of words are very good here. Nice work with this piece.
17Unique1952I usually prefer pieces that are a little longer, but I think that the length coupled with your choice of words are very good here. Nice work with this piece.
10/29/2008 c1 105The Exuberant
Hmm I thought it was good.
the last two lines were my favorite :)
oh and no need to review one of mine
im on a review spree :P
105The ExuberantHmm I thought it was good.
the last two lines were my favorite :)
oh and no need to review one of mine
im on a review spree :P
10/28/2008 c1 5K. Molle
this almost sounds like a poem i've read before. Good flow and nice vocab choices.
5K. Mollethis almost sounds like a poem i've read before. Good flow and nice vocab choices.
10/28/2008 c1 Safi Kittykat
I dont expect a review back, but i wanted to say I really do like the last two lines! it sounds pretty... :)
I dont expect a review back, but i wanted to say I really do like the last two lines! it sounds pretty... :)