for roads3/4/2010 c1 
51for shame
the way you write is twisting,
and it holds a strange sort of rhythm
that always seems to be changing.
i like it.
51for shamethe way you write is twisting,
and it holds a strange sort of rhythm
that always seems to be changing.
i like it.
7/20/2009 c1 1tonight we bloom
wow, this is passionate and full of stunning imagery. i love it.
i would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot!
1tonight we bloomwow, this is passionate and full of stunning imagery. i love it.
i would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot!
3/28/2009 c1 145young and the reckless
i especially loved the assonance of: "dip the tips of my fingers in the slips of your lips" ..it flowed so easily.
y&r
145young and the recklessi especially loved the assonance of: "dip the tips of my fingers in the slips of your lips" ..it flowed so easily.
y&r