for slip7/20/2009 c1 
1tonight we bloom
i love the use of simple words in this, it reflected the theme of your poem very nicely. great rhythm, great description, beautiful wording.
an excellent piece.
1tonight we bloomi love the use of simple words in this, it reflected the theme of your poem very nicely. great rhythm, great description, beautiful wording.
an excellent piece.
3/28/2009 c1 145young and the reckless
i like the carefree nature of it. it's like during the perfect moments of a relationship, when everything's just bliss, and the world is all sunshine.
y&r
145young and the recklessi like the carefree nature of it. it's like during the perfect moments of a relationship, when everything's just bliss, and the world is all sunshine.
y&r