for The Final Act of Their Final Hour1/3/2009 c1 
13blurrylights
This was really good! I liked it...very free form, and very realistic. Teens die in car crashes every day, and it's a sad reality. Nice job. :)
13blurrylightsThis was really good! I liked it...very free form, and very realistic. Teens die in car crashes every day, and it's a sad reality. Nice job. :)
11/2/2008 c1 3J.R. Constantine
Not a bad poem. I'm not one for poetry, but this was good. The title blends well with the whole idea of the poem, a good work for something that just came to you. You're a good author.
3J.R. ConstantineNot a bad poem. I'm not one for poetry, but this was good. The title blends well with the whole idea of the poem, a good work for something that just came to you. You're a good author.
10/31/2008 c1 56WhatAboutDolly
rhyme scheme was good. im not a big fan of tragedy cus it makes me too sad, but you sucked me into it.
56WhatAboutDollyrhyme scheme was good. im not a big fan of tragedy cus it makes me too sad, but you sucked me into it.