7/19/2009 c1 Xx-Angel-of-Shadows-xX
...That's too sad, poor lady.

Very well written, I don't think I saw any mistakes, well done!

Very powerful, real sounding, and the plot is great too. I think that's gonna be stuck in my mind for some time now.

Congratulations!

~Star~

11/16/2008 c1 10Caecilia
Wow... This is a pretty bizarre story.

Good writing... Nothing that I can find wrong.

Really like how she thinks the kids dressed up are real, and transposes the monster's characteristics onto the kids. Good stuff.

~Cae