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11/3/2008 c1 Kaydee
"Those around me (or something simmilar) is used twice - perhaps substitue da second on for 'them'

but it rocks!
11/2/2008 c1 3canislupus7
you definatley have my attention. Even though the chapter wasn't long, I got a few nice details of the characters, enough to get to know them a little. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :D

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11/1/2008 c1 That person
...UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! IT SOUNDS SO INTERESTING!
11/1/2008 c1 6SilentSongs
This is just what a beginning should be - short and attention grabbing. You need to write more!
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