for Operation: Happily Ever After9/16/2011 c1 
5darknightstar
Please please pretty please sent me the url for thestory on fan fic? Would love to read it.
5darknightstarPlease please pretty please sent me the url for thestory on fan fic? Would love to read it.
7/30/2011 c1 awesomer
coolest thing i ever read! lol love it tht he's got a badboy attitude and tht this is going down a cool road of awesomeness! lol ok tht was lame but dont hate anyways update soon! plus can she not be so wimpy? =.= sigh sigh
coolest thing i ever read! lol love it tht he's got a badboy attitude and tht this is going down a cool road of awesomeness! lol ok tht was lame but dont hate anyways update soon! plus can she not be so wimpy? =.= sigh sigh
6/8/2011 c2 crazybelle
Hey, really loved the first chapter, would be interested in the rest of the story if you could send me the fanfic url ^^
Hey, really loved the first chapter, would be interested in the rest of the story if you could send me the fanfic url ^^
7/14/2010 c2 Bubbly Girl
Well... if it helps any, I really liked the first chapter! :) I will try to visit your story on fanfiction dot net but if I don't, sorry! :) Keep writing! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
Well... if it helps any, I really liked the first chapter! :) I will try to visit your story on fanfiction dot net but if I don't, sorry! :) Keep writing! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
11/26/2008 c1 Fascination MaXx
I'll review, because you asked oh so nicely.
Interesting scenario. Like Fairly Odd Parents, but for teens, which would have been a cool show had someone thought of it. Kudos (whatever those things are) for not having the main characters get along right away. However, it would be a little easier to follow without the POV changes.
The writing itself is easy to follow and I don't see anything wrong grammer, spelling, and punctuation-wise. I believe you are good to go.
:)
I'll review, because you asked oh so nicely.
Interesting scenario. Like Fairly Odd Parents, but for teens, which would have been a cool show had someone thought of it. Kudos (whatever those things are) for not having the main characters get along right away. However, it would be a little easier to follow without the POV changes.
The writing itself is easy to follow and I don't see anything wrong grammer, spelling, and punctuation-wise. I believe you are good to go.
:)
11/4/2008 c1 klghgsstgjl
She'll end up with Alex isn't she?
I liked him better than her XD
Is this lyric correct? Cause it looks alike 'every breath you take' from the police, and I know P. Diddy covered this song when I don't remember who died, he did it on a vma... But sting sings 'Oh can't you see... You belong to me' I LOVE this song, so beautiful! x3
Say, are you going to take too long to update this and the other story? Cause you know, I don't like to wait! u.u
kisses honey! ;*
She'll end up with Alex isn't she?
I liked him better than her XD
Is this lyric correct? Cause it looks alike 'every breath you take' from the police, and I know P. Diddy covered this song when I don't remember who died, he did it on a vma... But sting sings 'Oh can't you see... You belong to me' I LOVE this song, so beautiful! x3
Say, are you going to take too long to update this and the other story? Cause you know, I don't like to wait! u.u
kisses honey! ;*
11/1/2008 c1 4pagalindian
WOW! Great story, I really enjoyed it. You characterized the people really well, and balanced the fantasy part of it with the normal part, so it isn't too hard to believe. Great job, I can't wait to read more.
4pagalindianWOW! Great story, I really enjoyed it. You characterized the people really well, and balanced the fantasy part of it with the normal part, so it isn't too hard to believe. Great job, I can't wait to read more.
11/1/2008 c1 3Big Boots Man Of War
hey this was a really good start! i liked it immensley!
Alex is a pri*k. Although he sounds like a very gorgeous pri*k.
more would be really really good.
xoxoxoxo
3Big Boots Man Of Warhey this was a really good start! i liked it immensley!
Alex is a pri*k. Although he sounds like a very gorgeous pri*k.
more would be really really good.
xoxoxoxo