4/26/2011 c1 17Ashley4287
now.. i would read this... if it was getting updated! please update this soon
now.. i would read this... if it was getting updated! please update this soon
4/24/2011 c1 Nicole
Trent, Mandie and Evan's older brother, Trent, was Nick's older brother. Well, I always thought it was kind of funny.
I think you made a mistake in mentioning trent twice :) because as far as i know, chris is nicks older brother. not hating, just wanted to point it out to you :)
Trent, Mandie and Evan's older brother, Trent, was Nick's older brother. Well, I always thought it was kind of funny.
I think you made a mistake in mentioning trent twice :) because as far as i know, chris is nicks older brother. not hating, just wanted to point it out to you :)
4/10/2011 c1 3sora kinomoto
Great chapter! I love Mandie, she's really funny. Can0t wait to read more!
Great chapter! I love Mandie, she's really funny. Can0t wait to read more!
4/9/2011 c1 222writer
I just finished reading Changes and I loved it! I can't wait to see how this story turns out! Great so far! The only thing is, in Changes it says Chris is Nick's older brother, and in this you said that Trent was his older brother...I was kind of confused. But other than that, please continue writing! :) Way to go!
I just finished reading Changes and I loved it! I can't wait to see how this story turns out! Great so far! The only thing is, in Changes it says Chris is Nick's older brother, and in this you said that Trent was his older brother...I was kind of confused. But other than that, please continue writing! :) Way to go!
4/9/2011 c1 ummmmmmmmmmmmm
one word. CONTINUE!
one word. CONTINUE!
4/9/2011 c1 10StreetsOfGold
I really love this! I also just read your other story and fell in love with all of the characters!
I really love this! I also just read your other story and fell in love with all of the characters!
4/9/2011 c1 211cina24
hahhaha i liked the last two sentences(x
good start though, enjoying it so far.
And btw, i think something maay be up with your format?idk cuz it like splits a sentence in half so part of it is with the rest of it, and the other half is like in a paragrah of its own,lol. But yeaa, it's still good either way, just wanted to point that out to you if you didn't already now.
hahhaha i liked the last two sentences(x
good start though, enjoying it so far.
And btw, i think something maay be up with your format?idk cuz it like splits a sentence in half so part of it is with the rest of it, and the other half is like in a paragrah of its own,lol. But yeaa, it's still good either way, just wanted to point that out to you if you didn't already now.
12/30/2010 c1 daybyday
MMk, so you are my favorite FictionPress author at the moment and I absolutely love all your stories! I can't wait until they're all done! But one thing that annoys me is when I read a description and click on the story just to find that it's been removed for plagiarism or other reasons. I think if you add something in the description saying that the story isn't on the site right now, lots of people would appreciate it. It may even stop those rude reviews, since then you can always say you gave fair warning. Alrighty, I think that's it. Can't wait for updates:)
MMk, so you are my favorite FictionPress author at the moment and I absolutely love all your stories! I can't wait until they're all done! But one thing that annoys me is when I read a description and click on the story just to find that it's been removed for plagiarism or other reasons. I think if you add something in the description saying that the story isn't on the site right now, lots of people would appreciate it. It may even stop those rude reviews, since then you can always say you gave fair warning. Alrighty, I think that's it. Can't wait for updates:)
10/17/2010 c1 Bummer
I'm new to this site and I read one of your stories and I liked it so I clicked the author. Someone said something about TWTW so I tried finding it and found out you got rid of it. That sucks. It seemd to be your most popular. Did you post it on a different site, perhaps? :)
I'm new to this site and I read one of your stories and I liked it so I clicked the author. Someone said something about TWTW so I tried finding it and found out you got rid of it. That sucks. It seemd to be your most popular. Did you post it on a different site, perhaps? :)