for SWITCH11/23/2011 c3 Fishylurv
I have fallen in love with your story. At first I thought it wasnt gonna be good b/c in the summary it said M/M while the first chapters were with a girl. I was in my gay boy mood and was not interested in heterosexual relationships. I could just watch my friends make out with their bfs if I wanted hetero. Not that I would do that...lol and I dont have any gay friends that would let me spy on them...-Sniff- They're so mean to meee! I am deprived!
Lol Well yeah. I can tell now that Im really gonna like this story, with the plot and all. Not to mention your writing style. I absolutely LOVE it! It makes the reading it all the more enjoyable. To tell you the truth, I am quite dumbfounded as to why you have such few reviews. Shocking, really. You desereve so much more than you have.
I have also observed that you havent updated in this story in quite a while. If its because you feel no one reads this, your wrong. There are plenty of people who read stories but are too damn lazy to review. I just really want you to update this story! I hate when authors abondon their storys. Not to point fingers or anything though.
I just hope when you read my review you'll be willing to continue, because there are people reading and enjoing this story. I would love to hear back from you as well! :]
~Fenrir
I have fallen in love with your story. At first I thought it wasnt gonna be good b/c in the summary it said M/M while the first chapters were with a girl. I was in my gay boy mood and was not interested in heterosexual relationships. I could just watch my friends make out with their bfs if I wanted hetero. Not that I would do that...lol and I dont have any gay friends that would let me spy on them...-Sniff- They're so mean to meee! I am deprived!
Lol Well yeah. I can tell now that Im really gonna like this story, with the plot and all. Not to mention your writing style. I absolutely LOVE it! It makes the reading it all the more enjoyable. To tell you the truth, I am quite dumbfounded as to why you have such few reviews. Shocking, really. You desereve so much more than you have.
I have also observed that you havent updated in this story in quite a while. If its because you feel no one reads this, your wrong. There are plenty of people who read stories but are too damn lazy to review. I just really want you to update this story! I hate when authors abondon their storys. Not to point fingers or anything though.
I just hope when you read my review you'll be willing to continue, because there are people reading and enjoing this story. I would love to hear back from you as well! :]
~Fenrir
1/29/2010 c11 
1r7gray
M... both! I can't decide. I am so impatient, but when will Taylor's ex-bff come into the story? Will she ever? I think she is one of my fav characters even though she hardly had a part :(. Will you pwease think about bringing her back?
Your fan,
r7gray :)
1r7grayM... both! I can't decide. I am so impatient, but when will Taylor's ex-bff come into the story? Will she ever? I think she is one of my fav characters even though she hardly had a part :(. Will you pwease think about bringing her back?
Your fan,
r7gray :)
1/28/2010 c8 r7gray
Great chapters so far! *gives a thumbs up*. Lol, the teacher... I really am confused about him. WHO IS HE? WILL HE HAVE SOMETHING WITH TAYTAY? (I like to call her-I mean HIM that. Lmfao, you are still the best, and also, just because you may not have tons of reviews, doesn't mean your story isn't as good as the ones with 400 reviews. I think this is one of the most enjoyable fics ever, and anyone who doesn't see that is missing out on a really good story.
Great chapters so far! *gives a thumbs up*. Lol, the teacher... I really am confused about him. WHO IS HE? WILL HE HAVE SOMETHING WITH TAYTAY? (I like to call her-I mean HIM that. Lmfao, you are still the best, and also, just because you may not have tons of reviews, doesn't mean your story isn't as good as the ones with 400 reviews. I think this is one of the most enjoyable fics ever, and anyone who doesn't see that is missing out on a really good story.
1/28/2010 c3 r7gray
YOU ARE AMAZING! This story is AMAZING! I love this! I have been looking for something like this for a long long time. YOU are the best. Hey, if you know any more stories like this, tell me some? But, I still think yours is the best! YOU are so awesome for coming up with this. I can't wait to see how people react. Also, I love, absolutely love the fact that she can't turn back! Muahaha! YOU ROCK!
YOU ARE AMAZING! This story is AMAZING! I love this! I have been looking for something like this for a long long time. YOU are the best. Hey, if you know any more stories like this, tell me some? But, I still think yours is the best! YOU are so awesome for coming up with this. I can't wait to see how people react. Also, I love, absolutely love the fact that she can't turn back! Muahaha! YOU ROCK!
1/7/2010 c11 3no-ones-puppet
Holy hell! That was just wow... Um anyways, I just wanted to tell you that I just found your story which is why I haven't commented on any of the previous chapters... But i just wanted to say that your story is quite good! The descriptions of the rooms and setting can make it drag a little at times but otherwise it's written quite well.I hope you continue with it too... I haven't run across where there's a body switch anywhere else on here, so to me it's quite creative. :D
3no-ones-puppetHoly hell! That was just wow... Um anyways, I just wanted to tell you that I just found your story which is why I haven't commented on any of the previous chapters... But i just wanted to say that your story is quite good! The descriptions of the rooms and setting can make it drag a little at times but otherwise it's written quite well.I hope you continue with it too... I haven't run across where there's a body switch anywhere else on here, so to me it's quite creative. :D
11/2/2009 c11 insaneoreos
2 weeks l8r w/ flashbacks!
ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
2 weeks l8r w/ flashbacks!
ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
10/4/2009 c11 8Nightmaresbeasti'monlyhuman
As always i loved the chapter and am now not exactly camly waiting for the next chapter. I say U should do the flash back, because flash backs are fun and, well interesting.
8Nightmaresbeasti'monlyhumanAs always i loved the chapter and am now not exactly camly waiting for the next chapter. I say U should do the flash back, because flash backs are fun and, well interesting.
10/2/2009 c11 5Shikokudarkstar
I loved it as usual. The last part or the dream was orgasmic. Can't wait until it happens for real. I don't know if you meanted the other guy's name but that would be nice also so we don't have to keep refering to him as "the bastard" though if it's in a chapter or two I can wait. lol. Also I have my vote on the two week time skip.
5ShikokudarkstarI loved it as usual. The last part or the dream was orgasmic. Can't wait until it happens for real. I don't know if you meanted the other guy's name but that would be nice also so we don't have to keep refering to him as "the bastard" though if it's in a chapter or two I can wait. lol. Also I have my vote on the two week time skip.
8/7/2009 c10 8Nightmaresbeasti'monlyhuman
Scholl is total pain, i know, but as a faithful reader i'll wait as long as it takes... So no real rushing is coming to from me because school is what will get you somewhere in life. Hope you pass ;)
8Nightmaresbeasti'monlyhumanScholl is total pain, i know, but as a faithful reader i'll wait as long as it takes... So no real rushing is coming to from me because school is what will get you somewhere in life. Hope you pass ;)
7/12/2009 c9 Nightmaresbeasti'monlyhuman
OMG! I love this so much! *Sqeuls* Please write more soon. *Gives puppy dog eyes* Please? Anyways so its great so far and i loved how she became a he and all... Amazing!
OMG! I love this so much! *Sqeuls* Please write more soon. *Gives puppy dog eyes* Please? Anyways so its great so far and i loved how she became a he and all... Amazing!
6/29/2009 c9 5Shikokudarkstar
Like always I loved the chapter. I had to read it a few times before I got it though. Somehow I had got it in my head that Mike had kissed Taylor and then I wondered how they were doing that in class. lol XD
So yes I would love it if you made it easier to understand.If you really don't want to stop switching you could section off the 3rd person from the 1st that would be the easiest way. Switching to 3rd person pov would be okay as long as you keep up with the story. For those that didn't get the memo or just started you might confuse them for a while too.
Best of luck to you hun. I enjoyed the chapter and I hope you update soon. As always.
Happy Writing,
~Shik
5ShikokudarkstarLike always I loved the chapter. I had to read it a few times before I got it though. Somehow I had got it in my head that Mike had kissed Taylor and then I wondered how they were doing that in class. lol XD
So yes I would love it if you made it easier to understand.If you really don't want to stop switching you could section off the 3rd person from the 1st that would be the easiest way. Switching to 3rd person pov would be okay as long as you keep up with the story. For those that didn't get the memo or just started you might confuse them for a while too.
Best of luck to you hun. I enjoyed the chapter and I hope you update soon. As always.
Happy Writing,
~Shik
6/29/2009 c9 Lana
M.. even though I've never reviewed a story before, I felt the need to do so with this one. It has a ton of potential, and so far it's been very good! A bit confusing at some points where you have to go back and re-read to make sure you get what you're saying, but good nonetheless. I'm a very big fan of awkward moments and you've put a fair amount in SWITCH so far, so I'm happy! They make me laugh :D I'm interested in the situation with the sharing of the bathroom for that fact. One thing I feel the need to say is that you should stick to either first person or third person for each section. When you're writing in third person, focus on everyone and not just one character to make it less confusing. Kind of like your an outsider looking in. Not too sure that it will, but I hope this helps! And of course, I must add the routine 'please update' :)
~Lana
M.. even though I've never reviewed a story before, I felt the need to do so with this one. It has a ton of potential, and so far it's been very good! A bit confusing at some points where you have to go back and re-read to make sure you get what you're saying, but good nonetheless. I'm a very big fan of awkward moments and you've put a fair amount in SWITCH so far, so I'm happy! They make me laugh :D I'm interested in the situation with the sharing of the bathroom for that fact. One thing I feel the need to say is that you should stick to either first person or third person for each section. When you're writing in third person, focus on everyone and not just one character to make it less confusing. Kind of like your an outsider looking in. Not too sure that it will, but I hope this helps! And of course, I must add the routine 'please update' :)
~Lana