for Beautiful Mistakes7/18/2012 c27 DA-chen1
I knew it, since the chapter started! :-)
Greatygreat! Finally, his own child! Hihi... great plotline, a bit much of Leigh but in the end, sooo good! Love your story!
Mira
I knew it, since the chapter started! :-)
Greatygreat! Finally, his own child! Hihi... great plotline, a bit much of Leigh but in the end, sooo good! Love your story!
Mira
7/18/2012 c26 DA-chen1
Oh... your story was so sweet!
I think, it's not easy to play the fatherhood, when you are infantile.. but I really like them together and how he is really trying! Sometimes I thought, he is only with her because of Alyssa! But then I thought about the times, when they were talking and spending time together.. he really likes her! ;-)
Mira
Oh... your story was so sweet!
I think, it's not easy to play the fatherhood, when you are infantile.. but I really like them together and how he is really trying! Sometimes I thought, he is only with her because of Alyssa! But then I thought about the times, when they were talking and spending time together.. he really likes her! ;-)
Mira
7/18/2012 c22 DA-chen1
That was sweet and really great! Love them both! No, the three together :") Or perhaps, four? ;-)
Mira
That was sweet and really great! Love them both! No, the three together :") Or perhaps, four? ;-)
Mira
7/17/2012 c27 
1J.H. McFarland
I can't remember if I've posted a review on here or not, because I've read this story several times. lol. But I just want to say that I absolutely LOVE the way you made it seem like Matt was the lead male, and then switched over to Aaron! It was so seamless and perfectly transitioned (redundant but I don't care) and before I realized it, you flipped the entire story around. I LOVE this. PLEASE get it published so I can BUY it. I want a hard copy of this story!
1J.H. McFarlandI can't remember if I've posted a review on here or not, because I've read this story several times. lol. But I just want to say that I absolutely LOVE the way you made it seem like Matt was the lead male, and then switched over to Aaron! It was so seamless and perfectly transitioned (redundant but I don't care) and before I realized it, you flipped the entire story around. I LOVE this. PLEASE get it published so I can BUY it. I want a hard copy of this story!
7/17/2012 c17 DA-chen1
Hi, dear author!
THIS chapter was your best, so far! :-))
Really great how both of them managed the situation in the hospital and afterwards! I begin to love Aaron as a character! Great!
Mira
Hi, dear author!
THIS chapter was your best, so far! :-))
Really great how both of them managed the situation in the hospital and afterwards! I begin to love Aaron as a character! Great!
Mira
7/17/2012 c16 DA-chen1
Something is fishy here.. perhaps he has his own scheme about Julie.. to trust her with the restaurant because he has better things to do..? Open up another restaurant.. no.. perhaps he is ill? Must go to a treatment at the hospital? Hmm.. really suspicious! And I don't think, Aaron is a lamb! But Matt is not the best brother and person.. can she trust him?
Mira
Something is fishy here.. perhaps he has his own scheme about Julie.. to trust her with the restaurant because he has better things to do..? Open up another restaurant.. no.. perhaps he is ill? Must go to a treatment at the hospital? Hmm.. really suspicious! And I don't think, Aaron is a lamb! But Matt is not the best brother and person.. can she trust him?
Mira
7/17/2012 c15 DA-chen1
Really cute, how she lies in bed and is thinking about this twisted situation! :-)
Mira
Really cute, how she lies in bed and is thinking about this twisted situation! :-)
Mira
7/17/2012 c14 DA-chen1
Hey.. I think, the deal is not that bad.. but you never know what Emma has in mind..
Mira
Hey.. I think, the deal is not that bad.. but you never know what Emma has in mind..
Mira