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11/8/2008 c2 9Stooped
I think that the memory of it should come back to Oliver. And then he'd be all, "WHY DID I DO THAT?" and then he'd realize that he's completely and totally in love with Felix. Just like Felix is for him. I feel so bad for Felix. I mean, all that hurt... It's just horrible. Way to pull me into the story, jeez. I love it! Update QUICKLY!
11/8/2008 c2 Pretty. Odd
Oh, how sad. ): Poor, poor Felix. I feel so bad for him.

But, your story is so beauifully worded (: I hope there's more soon
11/8/2008 c2 Le1chi
Aw..Poor Felix..Urgh, another reason why I won't get drunk -_-..
11/8/2008 c2 crissie
Even from the beginning, the fact that Felix was so calm got my curious... and what happened/was revealed in the rest of the chapter surprised me a lot. But it also gets me sad that they both sorta have a strain in their relationship.
11/8/2008 c2 23firestar267
Loved this once again :) cant wait for more!
11/6/2008 c1 3Balliett
Hm. Any chance you were going for A Separate Peace-esque feeling? I really got that vibe from this story, although your writing style is a little more modern than Knowles's aged, beautiful mastery of language.

Oliver is a very human character. In him I see a lot of Eugene, A Seperate Peace's main character. His vehement envy is the sort of imperfection that makes humans human.

I love the Star Wars references, by the way. Unique yet classic at the same time. Who doesn't love a Star Wars geek? xD

I liked the story so far. I want to see where the story will lead. My basic opinion of the story so far is : modern!A Separate Peace. Maybe your story will have a happier ending. Ooh, but I'm really anticipating the character development. =D

Awesome job so far. I am adoring your stories~!
11/5/2008 c1 2evangelinefyre
Ohoho. Oliver's in for it now. Well, more like Felix is. If Oliver can manage to get his hung-over'd butt out of bed to try and kick Felix's butt.

I'm really interested to see what happens next!
11/4/2008 c1 oo
woah. wasnt expecting that! i mean that dude was on a roll with the hating ya know. he was breaking the friendship off. duh! and then you just sprung that on me in the last paragraphs. just, wow. what a surprise.

more please!

i cant wait to see how hes gonna handle this! he cant handle the boy being better than him, so i imagine hes just gonna drown now.

does he like him like that? is that his problem. his thoughts didnt mention it or anything in this chapter so... he does and just doesnt know it yet? is that what your doin?

just add more please. your writing doesnt sux!
11/4/2008 c1 my own prince
This is twisting me. It's like Oliver secretly hates his best friend Felix, but he know he shouldn't because technically, felix isn't doing anything wrong - but then I feel bad for Felix because he obviously doesn't know what's wrong too, why Oliver's suddenly ignoring him, and then I get a feeling that felix likes Oliver more than a friend, but then I feel sad again because how will that like, relationship go furthur if Oliver secretly hates him/feels inferior to him? And it's like I can't feel mad for Oliver ignoring felix because I'd feel the same way, it's a major blow to the self confidence you know?

This is so bittersweet!
11/4/2008 c1 McAbacus
I've just deleted the opening of my review about five times because I'm inadaquately able to convey how much I enjoyed the suprise of your last scene. Colour my expectations confounded.

What I mean to say is, and I'm still failing to do so, is that I like the best-friend-enstrangement storyline and I was toddling along enjoying the set up of character and situation when you came out and put something that I expected to be in the story somewhere where I completely DIDNT expect it to be in the story. If I made sense? Anyway, I really liked it. I think I can only enjoy what happens next.

And also, I like Oliver's frustration. It's well pitched. I can see how he would get worn down having such a talented (and good looking, yeah I heard you say it Oliver) friend.

P.S Pretty Felix picture
11/4/2008 c1 2pfeiffer
you have got to update soon... i want to know how they ended up in a more than compromising morning after barely even speaking to each other because the supposed bestfriend cant deal with his inferiority... i like the start... makes me want to read more...

please please update soon
11/3/2008 c1 Amarena
Oh~ you know, something just came to me... could it be that this wasn't the first time? That would explain why Oliver's not oh-so-surprised.

Unless it's a norm for him to get wasted and wake up the next morning with someone at his side.
11/3/2008 c1 Amarena
Fuck indeed, Oliver, fuck indeed.

Ah, hell, you know it. Wonderful. Masterpiece. Pure... bishie-ness. What else can I ask?
11/3/2008 c1 pushing a daisy
I felt so bad for Oliver during that swimming class. He badly wants to beat Felix, but I think he's also the kind of guy who doesn't want his rival to let him win. It must be so confusing for him - and the thing is, I love Felix! You're spoiling us with your great writing, milk bottle
11/3/2008 c1 Le1chi
O.M.G. a new one! I absolutely love your stories =D lol Oliver totally got owned, poor Felix, I hope Oliver doesn't freak out on him (which is very likely)
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