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11/2/2008 c1 sapere
Interesting beginning! Can`t wait for the next chapter! :)
11/2/2008 c1 crissie
I could feel for Oliver here. I hate losing, and even though I should be all sportsman like, it just sucks. But imagine losing all the time to your best friend - and the guy's not even a prick about it. Ahh, painful.
11/2/2008 c1 12Ryette
Wow, I loved this :)

That picture of Felix is just A-mazing, as well.

But aside from that, I really like your style, and can't wait to see more of these two boys and Oliver's Star Wars obsession...question mark?

-Ryette
11/2/2008 c1 Jaded Devil
I like it! It kind of takes me back to when I was in elementary school. I used to be better than my friend at a lot of things, but she always beat me when it came to making new friends and playing sports, so I guess we were pretty even.

It was really surprising that Oliver and Felix slept together... hopefully their relationship will get better from this point!
11/2/2008 c1 magalina
O.O Felix was awfully calm about waking up next to him! Unless he´s going to start freaking out next chapter? I LOVED it, I can´t wait for the next chapter!
11/2/2008 c1 12Kanilla
Now, that's a sucky situation to wake up to. I like the humor that you refer to as "lame", and these two boys are interesting enough to make me want to read on :) Update?

-Kanilla
11/2/2008 c1 23firestar267
WOW

I LOVED IT!

Really I did! I cant wait for more :)
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