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11/2/2008 c1 73An Inside Joke
You have some real strong dream imagery here. Unfortunatley, your sentences have a tendency to run-on, making the flow a bit hard to follow. In some bits, it feels more like poetry than prose, which isn't necessary a bad thing, but it's hard to concentrate with enough depth through the course of a whole paragraph.

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