for Dinner Rush1/31/2009 c1 Isca
"'How about a cold glass of beer
with just the right amount of head?'
If it's a man, you offer the slightest
smile, so quick it could have been
the neon lighting, red as a freudian slip."
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! The sexual overtones in this real-life scenario are awesome. Great writing!
"'How about a cold glass of beer
with just the right amount of head?'
If it's a man, you offer the slightest
smile, so quick it could have been
the neon lighting, red as a freudian slip."
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! The sexual overtones in this real-life scenario are awesome. Great writing!
11/8/2008 c1 heart'sespionage
you are extremely talented, i think you can send in any one of your poems and you'd be published immediately if you haven't been already. very very good job!
you are extremely talented, i think you can send in any one of your poems and you'd be published immediately if you haven't been already. very very good job!
11/5/2008 c1 
194Aslan Israel
Great dynamics... perfect balance between the dialogue and rest of the poem. This was really nice to read.
194Aslan IsraelGreat dynamics... perfect balance between the dialogue and rest of the poem. This was really nice to read.