for Once I Was A Child4/7/2011 c1 OP
I just wanted to let you know this is some the most beautiful prose I've seen on FP.
I just wanted to let you know this is some the most beautiful prose I've seen on FP.
5/22/2009 c4 
23witheredxwaste
fuck yes
thank you, my darling, for posting another chapter
i simply cannot wait for the murder that is promised in the summary (whachama call it?) of the story...
thank you for gracing the world (internet?) with your mind-numbing words...!
-h.l.b.
23witheredxwastefuck yes
thank you, my darling, for posting another chapter
i simply cannot wait for the murder that is promised in the summary (whachama call it?) of the story...
thank you for gracing the world (internet?) with your mind-numbing words...!
-h.l.b.
1/20/2009 c3 1Gunning Twice
Your story...it's just...wow.
No really. It's interesting, the way you portray the inner workings of the main character's mind. I wish I could do that.
I'm not that 'deep' as some people call it. And I guess I'm dissing myself by saying that; making me sound like I'm a shallow person and all, but this rambling is beside the point.
The point I'm trying to make is...
...I don't know really. All I know is that I'd like to read more if you ever do continue it. You're a great writer, and I like the way Jackie's mind works, even if it does makes me feel all dumb and unauthory. See? That's not even a word.
Sincerely,
Miss:(istic
1Gunning TwiceYour story...it's just...wow.
No really. It's interesting, the way you portray the inner workings of the main character's mind. I wish I could do that.
I'm not that 'deep' as some people call it. And I guess I'm dissing myself by saying that; making me sound like I'm a shallow person and all, but this rambling is beside the point.
The point I'm trying to make is...
...I don't know really. All I know is that I'd like to read more if you ever do continue it. You're a great writer, and I like the way Jackie's mind works, even if it does makes me feel all dumb and unauthory. See? That's not even a word.
Sincerely,
Miss:(istic
1/17/2009 c3 5Far.abi
Still here. I can see your really committed to your writing cuz it's just that good. I like Ricky a lot but I'm unsure about the main character. Keep writing.
By the way, do you have any character pics in mind?
5Far.abiStill here. I can see your really committed to your writing cuz it's just that good. I like Ricky a lot but I'm unsure about the main character. Keep writing.
By the way, do you have any character pics in mind?
1/17/2009 c3 9Narq
Well, duh, of course I have something to prove - to prove to YOU that this is a great story and one to be proud of!
Please update!
Narq.
9NarqWell, duh, of course I have something to prove - to prove to YOU that this is a great story and one to be proud of!
Please update!
Narq.
1/17/2009 c2 Narq
Well... it's true, you write really well...I believed this happened sometime, somewhere.
Only good writers do that, you know?
Narq.
Well... it's true, you write really well...I believed this happened sometime, somewhere.
Only good writers do that, you know?
Narq.
1/17/2009 c1 Narq
Why? I think everyone will love this! I think it's really good and you've certianly got style!
Narq.
Why? I think everyone will love this! I think it's really good and you've certianly got style!
Narq.
12/23/2008 c1 6strobeXlightXstatic
I adore the detail in this oneshot-type-of-thing. It was poignant but enjoyable in a non-perverted way to read. Keep at it! - strobeXlightXstatic
6strobeXlightXstaticI adore the detail in this oneshot-type-of-thing. It was poignant but enjoyable in a non-perverted way to read. Keep at it! - strobeXlightXstatic
11/15/2008 c1 23witheredxwaste
I like it. I tell you this in a review.
So don't count your chickens before they hatch.
23witheredxwasteI like it. I tell you this in a review.
So don't count your chickens before they hatch.
11/3/2008 c1 Sweet123
This story was magnificent. Kudos to for all your hard work. The only critique I have is "There she is, curled gold brown hair just as Ricky's is down to her breast, wide beautiful blue eyes, innocent and unmarred by time." Confused me for a moment. It made it seem very naughty than it was.
Cant wait for more
This story was magnificent. Kudos to for all your hard work. The only critique I have is "There she is, curled gold brown hair just as Ricky's is down to her breast, wide beautiful blue eyes, innocent and unmarred by time." Confused me for a moment. It made it seem very naughty than it was.
Cant wait for more