for Secrets Like Acid12/1/2008 c18 tainted music
Argh! Urgh! That family leaves such a bad taste in my mouth and mind. More drama!
Argh! Urgh! That family leaves such a bad taste in my mouth and mind. More drama!
12/1/2008 c1 
2Spawner
Damn the suspense!
Can't wait to see what happens next
You've done an awesome job with the story, and congrats on the win, cause you deserved it!
-Spawner
2SpawnerDamn the suspense!
Can't wait to see what happens next
You've done an awesome job with the story, and congrats on the win, cause you deserved it!
-Spawner
12/1/2008 c18 4S.K. Allen
You are not seriously living me like this are you?
OMG I think I might die if I don't get an update soon.
4S.K. AllenYou are not seriously living me like this are you?
OMG I think I might die if I don't get an update soon.
12/1/2008 c18 19zutAra101
i'm not liking this chapter, pisses me off but i guess that it needs to be done. can't wait for the next update
19zutAra101i'm not liking this chapter, pisses me off but i guess that it needs to be done. can't wait for the next update
12/1/2008 c18 Omok
and here i was, wondering how come you didn't up date for so long. XD hahah,yayy update. times two! XD my god XD amazing story. I love it. as usual. Lol. X_x; though I really really do hope you'd update 'sonnets in my gym bag' soon T-T; x_x; i've been waiting for the next chapter(s) for a long long long time. x_x;;
anyways; wow. T-T; this is a very very very bad cliff hanger..lol...T-T; i REALLY hope you'd update soon. you MUST!
and here i was, wondering how come you didn't up date for so long. XD hahah,yayy update. times two! XD my god XD amazing story. I love it. as usual. Lol. X_x; though I really really do hope you'd update 'sonnets in my gym bag' soon T-T; x_x; i've been waiting for the next chapter(s) for a long long long time. x_x;;
anyways; wow. T-T; this is a very very very bad cliff hanger..lol...T-T; i REALLY hope you'd update soon. you MUST!
12/1/2008 c18 5phoenix6787
Wow, what an obnoxious family! I'm so glad Randi got the heck out of there. Elise is falling into that "please everyone" trap. I hope she blows up and tells her family how it really is soon. As for Roger, he needs to get slapped and put in his place :P
Oh, and congrats on meeting your goal. Great job!
5phoenix6787Wow, what an obnoxious family! I'm so glad Randi got the heck out of there. Elise is falling into that "please everyone" trap. I hope she blows up and tells her family how it really is soon. As for Roger, he needs to get slapped and put in his place :P
Oh, and congrats on meeting your goal. Great job!
11/27/2008 c16 2bignsassy818
Wow.. we needed that moment in Elise's father's office. It's been too long. Sucks that it was shortened. Great work! Thanks for the update!
2bignsassy818Wow.. we needed that moment in Elise's father's office. It's been too long. Sucks that it was shortened. Great work! Thanks for the update!
11/26/2008 c16 170.0 NightRiders 0.0
wow
the suspense in killing me
Is*
I cant be bothered to spell check when im typing in the dark xD
Love the chappy, slightly too quick, like the whirlwind in a storm...and the racisist, sexist pigs arent helping either yet...
i hope elise doesnt give into them at the poiint of pressure:/
Awesom
sam
x
170.0 NightRiders 0.0wow
the suspense in killing me
Is*
I cant be bothered to spell check when im typing in the dark xD
Love the chappy, slightly too quick, like the whirlwind in a storm...and the racisist, sexist pigs arent helping either yet...
i hope elise doesnt give into them at the poiint of pressure:/
Awesom
sam
x
11/24/2008 c15 2bignsassy818
i love me some Taylor Swift.. She's the BEST! That guy Roger sure was a surprise. I definitely did not see that coming. I thought Heath having a crush on Elise was cute. I had a crush on our neighbor once when I was five but that was innocence.. I thought he was so handsome.. Well, relationships have their ups and downs.. good work!
2bignsassy818i love me some Taylor Swift.. She's the BEST! That guy Roger sure was a surprise. I definitely did not see that coming. I thought Heath having a crush on Elise was cute. I had a crush on our neighbor once when I was five but that was innocence.. I thought he was so handsome.. Well, relationships have their ups and downs.. good work!
11/23/2008 c15 5phoenix6787
Yeah, dragon lady needs to come out and tell those pretentious relatives a thing or two! Good chapter, don't care for Elise's relatives though, so fake. I guess that means you wrote them real well!
5phoenix6787Yeah, dragon lady needs to come out and tell those pretentious relatives a thing or two! Good chapter, don't care for Elise's relatives though, so fake. I guess that means you wrote them real well!
11/20/2008 c12 bignsassy818
Yes! It's all out.. the family's the only one left. I guess you're hinting that since Elise came out, it's Randi's turn soon enough. Good work! Oh, and I'm starting to hate Betsy
Yes! It's all out.. the family's the only one left. I guess you're hinting that since Elise came out, it's Randi's turn soon enough. Good work! Oh, and I'm starting to hate Betsy
11/20/2008 c11 bignsassy818
Well, it's out. Not the way I imagined it but the beach scene made it worth it. So did that hot kiss.. Poor Carin.. :P That twist with Bets was huge surprise although I had my suspicions with the phone calls and opposition to Randi
Well, it's out. Not the way I imagined it but the beach scene made it worth it. So did that hot kiss.. Poor Carin.. :P That twist with Bets was huge surprise although I had my suspicions with the phone calls and opposition to Randi