for Secrets Like Acid11/4/2008 c1 
170.0 NightRiders 0.0
Zomg. Woman, its official.
Im going to hack into your account and steal all the glory xD
Amazingly written beginning, really, i love it.
LOVE the idea, however the way youve set up ther paragraphs is really confusing.
Perhaps break lines or indications would work to help us?
Please and thanksyou!
Please continue, oh and one other thing.
A friend of mine is in the same competition as you :]
xD
The site is as slow as you can get ^^
Keep it up!
Sam
x
170.0 NightRiders 0.0Zomg. Woman, its official.
Im going to hack into your account and steal all the glory xD
Amazingly written beginning, really, i love it.
LOVE the idea, however the way youve set up ther paragraphs is really confusing.
Perhaps break lines or indications would work to help us?
Please and thanksyou!
Please continue, oh and one other thing.
A friend of mine is in the same competition as you :]
xD
The site is as slow as you can get ^^
Keep it up!
Sam
x
11/3/2008 c1 5phoenix6787
Another fine piece by Ms.Rowan! I adore the wit and realism your characters have. I love the "domestic terrorists don't have welcome mats" line that made me laugh. I'm definitely looking forward to more. It's a great storyline so far, no doubt you'll make it absolutely awesome.
5phoenix6787Another fine piece by Ms.Rowan! I adore the wit and realism your characters have. I love the "domestic terrorists don't have welcome mats" line that made me laugh. I'm definitely looking forward to more. It's a great storyline so far, no doubt you'll make it absolutely awesome.