for Secrets Like Acid1/2/2012 c27 moon
wow! Im so impressed! with this I´ve read two of your stories and they´re just amazing!
wow! Im so impressed! with this I´ve read two of your stories and they´re just amazing!
11/19/2011 c44 anonymous
so wow... i know im like a trillion years late (only a yr in actuality) but i loved reading your story. although the ending you used was long, i liked it bc it was more realistic than the rushed one chapter. sometimes thats a risk; not to wrap things up when the reader wants it. but true writers and avid readers will/have understand/understood that the other ending was for the better. so mucho kudos to you and i really hope you follow the advice and publish something someday :)
so wow... i know im like a trillion years late (only a yr in actuality) but i loved reading your story. although the ending you used was long, i liked it bc it was more realistic than the rushed one chapter. sometimes thats a risk; not to wrap things up when the reader wants it. but true writers and avid readers will/have understand/understood that the other ending was for the better. so mucho kudos to you and i really hope you follow the advice and publish something someday :)
8/17/2011 c41 SweetFangs
Randi still should've kicked Andrew's ass. Such an asshole!
Love the whole story. You have quite a lot of typos and extra/missing words but eh, not that big of a deal.
For the original ending, I feel like some parts were inconsistent. When I was reading it, Randi seemed sort mood-swingy. I mean, at the beginning she treated Elise like crap but at the middle, she started treating Elise nicely and it didn't feel right. It felt like someone crying one second then being bubbly and happy the next.
I felt like more should've happen between Randi and Elise before they got back together. But then again, that ending was "deleted."
Randi still should've kicked Andrew's ass. Such an asshole!
Love the whole story. You have quite a lot of typos and extra/missing words but eh, not that big of a deal.
For the original ending, I feel like some parts were inconsistent. When I was reading it, Randi seemed sort mood-swingy. I mean, at the beginning she treated Elise like crap but at the middle, she started treating Elise nicely and it didn't feel right. It felt like someone crying one second then being bubbly and happy the next.
I felt like more should've happen between Randi and Elise before they got back together. But then again, that ending was "deleted."
6/23/2011 c43 D
one of the best f/f stories I have ever read on fictionpress.
loveeeeeeeeeeeee it
lovevevevevveeeeeeee it!
I am glad that you choose to end it this way instead of the alternative ending even though it was a long ride for both of them.
thank you for writing this story, cant wait to reread it :D
one of the best f/f stories I have ever read on fictionpress.
loveeeeeeeeeeeee it
lovevevevevveeeeeeee it!
I am glad that you choose to end it this way instead of the alternative ending even though it was a long ride for both of them.
thank you for writing this story, cant wait to reread it :D
12/3/2010 c44 Spiral-Girl
whoa that was long! i think if anyone was watching me read those end chapters they would have given me really odd looks as i was making odd little squeaks *blushes* i loved the story x
whoa that was long! i think if anyone was watching me read those end chapters they would have given me really odd looks as i was making odd little squeaks *blushes* i loved the story x
11/19/2010 c34 Spiral-Girl
loving this story. :) hope you're okay as i notice you havtn updated in a while. i eagerly await the new chapter email on either of your in progress stories ;) x
loving this story. :) hope you're okay as i notice you havtn updated in a while. i eagerly await the new chapter email on either of your in progress stories ;) x
11/12/2010 c25 Spiral-Girl
whenever someone says ill never leave you its inevitable that the worst happens. :(. on a happier note i love randis grandma. :) x
whenever someone says ill never leave you its inevitable that the worst happens. :(. on a happier note i love randis grandma. :) x
11/12/2010 c24 Spiral-Girl
I know it wont make any difference... But no! :( bets is a massive bitch. I guess she was tryin to help her best mate tho. But still. X
I know it wont make any difference... But no! :( bets is a massive bitch. I guess she was tryin to help her best mate tho. But still. X
8/10/2010 c42 anti-epic
wow. so i liked that. enough that I read the whole thing, which is long as a novel (and good enough to be one, by the way). sorry im not offering more helpful feedback, but hey, what can i say. anyways, thanks for sharing.
wow. so i liked that. enough that I read the whole thing, which is long as a novel (and good enough to be one, by the way). sorry im not offering more helpful feedback, but hey, what can i say. anyways, thanks for sharing.
7/29/2010 c44 sam
Done!:D
Done!:D
6/17/2010 c17 
1pinkie509
I have noticed I tend to find your stories either in prpgress or complete lol. I have one question... what in the world is bocce ball? I have never heard of it before. I understand it is a lot like bowling. Also I am still waiting on Juls and Travis. Please tell me you will finish the story. I never really stayed on the site much until I found Sonnets In My Gymbag. In so many ways most of your stories that I have read I can relate to them in at least one way. You are a superb writer and I am also glad you won your award even though I am a little late. Well I am going back to read more.
1pinkie509I have noticed I tend to find your stories either in prpgress or complete lol. I have one question... what in the world is bocce ball? I have never heard of it before. I understand it is a lot like bowling. Also I am still waiting on Juls and Travis. Please tell me you will finish the story. I never really stayed on the site much until I found Sonnets In My Gymbag. In so many ways most of your stories that I have read I can relate to them in at least one way. You are a superb writer and I am also glad you won your award even though I am a little late. Well I am going back to read more.
3/1/2010 c43 Maggie
Ahh, another fantastic story that I 100% loved. I feel bad for two things: 1. That poor cabdriver that Randi left waiting for her when she was at her grandma's house and 2. All the people around me when I read chapter 25 and then had to leave for the evening. I was all over the place, but when they finally found each other again I was so happy and I'm so thankful that you're on fictionpress so I can get my daily dose of Randi & Elise or Travis & Juls. Speaking of Elise, I have to apologise - from chapter 1, my brain has insisted on calling her "Elsie" even though I know that isn't her name. But I don't think that has taken away from the story. I'm not sure which I like better now - Sonnets or this one. I just know that I am extremely ecstatic to have read them both and now I can't wait to start on the next one! :)
Maggie ♥ (
Ahh, another fantastic story that I 100% loved. I feel bad for two things: 1. That poor cabdriver that Randi left waiting for her when she was at her grandma's house and 2. All the people around me when I read chapter 25 and then had to leave for the evening. I was all over the place, but when they finally found each other again I was so happy and I'm so thankful that you're on fictionpress so I can get my daily dose of Randi & Elise or Travis & Juls. Speaking of Elise, I have to apologise - from chapter 1, my brain has insisted on calling her "Elsie" even though I know that isn't her name. But I don't think that has taken away from the story. I'm not sure which I like better now - Sonnets or this one. I just know that I am extremely ecstatic to have read them both and now I can't wait to start on the next one! :)
Maggie ♥ (
12/16/2009 c43 28Dust Errant
Really surprised to see this updated. Honestly can't say which ending Like more lol. Honestly I felt the first ending dragged on a bit too much, but then again, I felt there was a lot more...emotion in it as well.
28Dust ErrantReally surprised to see this updated. Honestly can't say which ending Like more lol. Honestly I felt the first ending dragged on a bit too much, but then again, I felt there was a lot more...emotion in it as well.
12/15/2009 c43 11beaumont santana
Hah! I love it! Thank you so much for typing that up, I enjoyed it thoroughly. That was intense, I loved the interaction between Randi and Elise. I'd almost forgotten how funny Randi is! Thanks again, great job girlie.
11beaumont santanaHah! I love it! Thank you so much for typing that up, I enjoyed it thoroughly. That was intense, I loved the interaction between Randi and Elise. I'd almost forgotten how funny Randi is! Thanks again, great job girlie.
12/15/2009 c43 10A Typical Aquarius
Though the alternatine ending was all very nice, and happy...
I gotta say, I liked the other ending better.
Nothing like a little drama to spice things up, hmm?
I really did love this story. It's one of my favorites. It was well written, and had an awesome plot.
Great job. :)
10A Typical AquariusThough the alternatine ending was all very nice, and happy...
I gotta say, I liked the other ending better.
Nothing like a little drama to spice things up, hmm?
I really did love this story. It's one of my favorites. It was well written, and had an awesome plot.
Great job. :)