for Secrets Like Acid12/15/2009 c42 Ayden Karasu
Wow. I don't think I've ever read something so beautiful.
It shouldn't be on a simple website.
It should be on paper, in a printed book, on shelves of every book shop all over the world.
You should be rich, I tell ya.
Hell, for a moment I thought to check the copyright laws and see if I could steal it from you.
But, well... it seems like I can't. (I wouldn't anyway. I have morals... maybe)
The point is, don't waste your talent here.
Make a job out of it. After reading this story, I know you can. So make a run for it, girl.
And when you become richer than the Rowling, send me a fruit basket!
P.s. I'm italian, so I apologize if there are grammar mistakes.
Wow. I don't think I've ever read something so beautiful.
It shouldn't be on a simple website.
It should be on paper, in a printed book, on shelves of every book shop all over the world.
You should be rich, I tell ya.
Hell, for a moment I thought to check the copyright laws and see if I could steal it from you.
But, well... it seems like I can't. (I wouldn't anyway. I have morals... maybe)
The point is, don't waste your talent here.
Make a job out of it. After reading this story, I know you can. So make a run for it, girl.
And when you become richer than the Rowling, send me a fruit basket!
P.s. I'm italian, so I apologize if there are grammar mistakes.
8/1/2009 c42 Anonymous
Hey.. This was a wonderful story, so wonderful that I actually came back late at night to give a review. I read it all in one shot this morning, and I have to say, it's a beautiful story.
But most of all, I just want to say thanks for writing this story. It touched me on a personal level, because the person I want to spend my life with is fourteen years older, and this story gave me hope, that maybe we can work things out for the better.
Thank you. *hug*
Hey.. This was a wonderful story, so wonderful that I actually came back late at night to give a review. I read it all in one shot this morning, and I have to say, it's a beautiful story.
But most of all, I just want to say thanks for writing this story. It touched me on a personal level, because the person I want to spend my life with is fourteen years older, and this story gave me hope, that maybe we can work things out for the better.
Thank you. *hug*
6/18/2009 c42 Brii
Sweet! I didn't expect the epilogue to be this long, but I'm really glad it was. nice and satisfying end. good job!
Sweet! I didn't expect the epilogue to be this long, but I'm really glad it was. nice and satisfying end. good job!
6/17/2009 c42 zaza84
Absolutely beautiful. This story is really good. It is wonderfully written. I love Randi and Elise.
Absolutely beautiful. This story is really good. It is wonderfully written. I love Randi and Elise.
6/12/2009 c42 
1elfinbunion
I enjoyed your story from start to finish, your an amazing author, thanks for sharing.
1elfinbunionI enjoyed your story from start to finish, your an amazing author, thanks for sharing.
6/12/2009 c42 Omok
wow. =_=; Randi is SO LUCKY. =_=; THE HOUSE SHE RANDOMLY PICKED TO FAINT ON...was...ARGH.
I'LL FAINT ON SUCH A PLACE/HOUSE ANY DAY! GOSH! so lucky; so lucky.
Elise is AMAZING. @_@; WHAT GOOD DID RANDI DID IN HER PAST LIFE TO DESERVE THIS? HUM?
How come I DON'T HAVE ANYTHING LIKE THIS?
NO FAIR. T-T;
! Elise is AMAZING. She'd give up that much for Randi. =D (well, not SOLELY for Randi. But surely Randi there made a HUGE impact) - and her family, i know you implied they'll be together - but gosh! Elise had to give up family for Randi too...
gosh~~
*sighs*
Elise Elise, she's so perfect...My dream girl...XD gosh. Lucky randi =_=; no fair. =_=;
Lols.
Well, I guess, this is it eh? the 'end' the 'finish'. =/ I'm sure you're aware, I hope you are at least, O_o; - I was with this story since the beginning...(did i tell you this already? *shrugs*) - I was always whining about updates for Sonnets (still am *stares*) and like, I fell in love with Sonnets...slowly, slowly, this story, took a big part of my heart too...
they're two great stories...
onlyifsonnetscanbeupdated. *smiles*
but yeah, I've seen this story grow, I've waited for days for an update, and MONTHHS and WEKS too. Checking my mail everyday just to see if there's an update (or something.) I love this story. The name you picked for it is brilliant too.
Thanks for writing. You're an awesome writer. (Also, great, masterful, brilliant, wonderful...etc etc.)
You know, I'd buy Sonnets and Secrets Like Acid if they were published books. =D
wow. =_=; Randi is SO LUCKY. =_=; THE HOUSE SHE RANDOMLY PICKED TO FAINT ON...was...ARGH.
I'LL FAINT ON SUCH A PLACE/HOUSE ANY DAY! GOSH! so lucky; so lucky.
Elise is AMAZING. @_@; WHAT GOOD DID RANDI DID IN HER PAST LIFE TO DESERVE THIS? HUM?
How come I DON'T HAVE ANYTHING LIKE THIS?
NO FAIR. T-T;
! Elise is AMAZING. She'd give up that much for Randi. =D (well, not SOLELY for Randi. But surely Randi there made a HUGE impact) - and her family, i know you implied they'll be together - but gosh! Elise had to give up family for Randi too...
gosh~~
*sighs*
Elise Elise, she's so perfect...My dream girl...XD gosh. Lucky randi =_=; no fair. =_=;
Lols.
Well, I guess, this is it eh? the 'end' the 'finish'. =/ I'm sure you're aware, I hope you are at least, O_o; - I was with this story since the beginning...(did i tell you this already? *shrugs*) - I was always whining about updates for Sonnets (still am *stares*) and like, I fell in love with Sonnets...slowly, slowly, this story, took a big part of my heart too...
they're two great stories...
onlyifsonnetscanbeupdated. *smiles*
but yeah, I've seen this story grow, I've waited for days for an update, and MONTHHS and WEKS too. Checking my mail everyday just to see if there's an update (or something.) I love this story. The name you picked for it is brilliant too.
Thanks for writing. You're an awesome writer. (Also, great, masterful, brilliant, wonderful...etc etc.)
You know, I'd buy Sonnets and Secrets Like Acid if they were published books. =D
6/12/2009 c42 Red Scarf
Wow Happy ending.I love it. I've enjoyed this story so much. It's such an awesome story, and you're awesome too. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. Hopefully in the original ending you would make Randi move back to California with Elise. I miss Elise's little, adorable, full-of-memory house at Monterey Beach. Update soon please! I cant wait to read that ending.
Wow Happy ending.I love it. I've enjoyed this story so much. It's such an awesome story, and you're awesome too. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. Hopefully in the original ending you would make Randi move back to California with Elise. I miss Elise's little, adorable, full-of-memory house at Monterey Beach. Update soon please! I cant wait to read that ending.
6/11/2009 c41 Omok
@_@; dang; so they're keeping this arrangement? @_@; it wouldn't work! it can't work! something have to be solved. It have to be solved! (and it will be.)
Can't wait to see HOW it'll be solved. :D
and and omg omg :D :D
yeah...XDD woot! I'm really happy that the Epilogue is really long. XD really. I don't mind...
now...about Sonnets...*coughs* must I say more?
@_@; dang; so they're keeping this arrangement? @_@; it wouldn't work! it can't work! something have to be solved. It have to be solved! (and it will be.)
Can't wait to see HOW it'll be solved. :D
and and omg omg :D :D
yeah...XDD woot! I'm really happy that the Epilogue is really long. XD really. I don't mind...
now...about Sonnets...*coughs* must I say more?
5/12/2009 c39 sheyla
there was a lot of naked dancing... It took me s longtime to read.. I guess I just wasn't ready for it...
THey came to a pretty good resolution I think
there was a lot of naked dancing... It took me s longtime to read.. I guess I just wasn't ready for it...
THey came to a pretty good resolution I think
5/11/2009 c39 25master of suspence
aw i loved the ending it was sweet and it was a fitting end for the two!
25master of suspenceaw i loved the ending it was sweet and it was a fitting end for the two!
5/10/2009 c39 Brii
Great story! I loved every update and I'm relieved they got their happy-end. well deserved happy-end. have fun during your vacation :)
Great story! I loved every update and I'm relieved they got their happy-end. well deserved happy-end. have fun during your vacation :)
5/10/2009 c39 sam
I love this story,Thank u so much for writing it.:)
I love this story,Thank u so much for writing it.:)