
6/6/2009 c1
4HighOnBrokenWings
OMFG! That was amazing...
"I shouldn't speak about Sara so harshly. I was the same way, once. Now, my whole world is changed. I no longer see only the black and white; now, I see the millions of shades of grey that separate people - and in doing so, bind them closer together as well."
I LOVED that bit! Absolutely adored it! This was so true! Wow, what did your english teacher think of this? It was freaking amazing! Wow, wow and just wow. I hate it how no one bothers to look behind the masks. You sumed up the whole esay so well.
This was amazing! Keep it up :D

OMFG! That was amazing...
"I shouldn't speak about Sara so harshly. I was the same way, once. Now, my whole world is changed. I no longer see only the black and white; now, I see the millions of shades of grey that separate people - and in doing so, bind them closer together as well."
I LOVED that bit! Absolutely adored it! This was so true! Wow, what did your english teacher think of this? It was freaking amazing! Wow, wow and just wow. I hate it how no one bothers to look behind the masks. You sumed up the whole esay so well.
This was amazing! Keep it up :D
1/15/2009 c1
12Alice B. Black
This story is so deep, so tragic, so wonderful. There's so much meaning in it, and when I first started I was unsure of where you were going with the masked names. I now see that it was for protection. There's so much insight to the story, and I am glad things did not end bad for Laura.
The masks concept is very beautiful, I loved the opening and it was closed together, everything making sense when you closed it off.
I hope you did well on your essay for English.
-Alice

This story is so deep, so tragic, so wonderful. There's so much meaning in it, and when I first started I was unsure of where you were going with the masked names. I now see that it was for protection. There's so much insight to the story, and I am glad things did not end bad for Laura.
The masks concept is very beautiful, I loved the opening and it was closed together, everything making sense when you closed it off.
I hope you did well on your essay for English.
-Alice
11/3/2008 c1
25destinee's notebook
Touching, and ever so true. Everyone sports a facade, and multiple masks at that. Different layers for different people. And I have never been able to take them all off. I doubt I ever will.
Excellent piece.

Touching, and ever so true. Everyone sports a facade, and multiple masks at that. Different layers for different people. And I have never been able to take them all off. I doubt I ever will.
Excellent piece.