for A Glance At Fate1/8/2009 c3 
15Forever Squishy
i like it, there are a few rough spots, but they're very minor ;P
update soon :D
15Forever Squishyi like it, there are a few rough spots, but they're very minor ;P
update soon :D
11/19/2008 c3 XxSiennaxX
Hey :) Yay - first review.
I like your story so far. The characters are well built although I'm not quite sure quite what Adam is like - does he not care for his sister?
Your text flows quite well in most areas although expression is very occasionally a little choppy.
I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work
Update soon please :D
Hey :) Yay - first review.
I like your story so far. The characters are well built although I'm not quite sure quite what Adam is like - does he not care for his sister?
Your text flows quite well in most areas although expression is very occasionally a little choppy.
I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work
Update soon please :D