for Sacrifice of Gold12/15/2008 c19 
2Kassandra Duric
Woa's attitude is great. lol
I liked this chapter best so far aside of the chapter where Kaseus took Lee away lol. Keep up the good work.
2Kassandra DuricWoa's attitude is great. lol
I liked this chapter best so far aside of the chapter where Kaseus took Lee away lol. Keep up the good work.
12/14/2008 c18 CoryD
I like the way you have multiple events going on (which are all necessary and related to the story). You present it very well!
I like the way you have multiple events going on (which are all necessary and related to the story). You present it very well!
12/14/2008 c18 Kassandra Duric
Lee and Kaseus keep sounding more and more like a perfect couple with each chapter that you write. ^_^ Keep up the good work. ^_^
Lee and Kaseus keep sounding more and more like a perfect couple with each chapter that you write. ^_^ Keep up the good work. ^_^
12/13/2008 c17 Kassandra Duric
lol. Kaseus seems to be having a ball in listening to these conversations. And it seems is queen to be is gaining quite the reputation between all of his people also. Hope to see more soon. ^_^
lol. Kaseus seems to be having a ball in listening to these conversations. And it seems is queen to be is gaining quite the reputation between all of his people also. Hope to see more soon. ^_^
12/12/2008 c17 Rocker301
I love it! I cant wait for the next part
I love it! I cant wait for the next part
12/6/2008 c16 Kassandra Duric
I love how you have the story so far. Keep up the good work.
one thing though, the chapters are a little short. Try to make them a little longer. Other than that it's really good. Keep up the good work and update it soon. ^_^
I love how you have the story so far. Keep up the good work.
one thing though, the chapters are a little short. Try to make them a little longer. Other than that it's really good. Keep up the good work and update it soon. ^_^
12/4/2008 c15 Chelsea
Hey me again. I just finished reading all of it. (not that I'm a slow reader but it was getting late last night, anyway.) I love this story, you have incorporated sexuality along with the story. I envy how you have made this whole world, I can never seem to that. Anyway I do love what you have written so far and cannot wait for you to update.
Hey me again. I just finished reading all of it. (not that I'm a slow reader but it was getting late last night, anyway.) I love this story, you have incorporated sexuality along with the story. I envy how you have made this whole world, I can never seem to that. Anyway I do love what you have written so far and cannot wait for you to update.
12/3/2008 c1 Chelsea
I read your first chapter and I cannot wait to read more. I would like to know a little more of her back ground and what she is fighting against. But I still have yet to read more. I'm going to finish what you have now tonight and will review back when I am done. So far I like it a lot though. :D
I read your first chapter and I cannot wait to read more. I would like to know a little more of her back ground and what she is fighting against. But I still have yet to read more. I'm going to finish what you have now tonight and will review back when I am done. So far I like it a lot though. :D
11/25/2008 c11 CoryD
Enjoying the story. The chapter with the explanations - that, of course, would have been better at the beginning of the story. Or maybe figuring a way to work it in to the story? You already had most of the details out there, so not sure the clarification was necessary (in helping with story comprehension).
Enjoying the story. The chapter with the explanations - that, of course, would have been better at the beginning of the story. Or maybe figuring a way to work it in to the story? You already had most of the details out there, so not sure the clarification was necessary (in helping with story comprehension).