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3/10/2009 c4 Sherlockian94
love the first three chapters, fourth is good but kinda random...
12/5/2008 c4 smile at the sun
Elise sounds a lot more smart/perceptive than people give her credit for. Great chapter. I love her and Ames. Please update soon.
12/3/2008 c3 smile at the sun
Ames is my favourite so far! Great writing. Though I was a little confused sometimes as to where you were talking about Ames, and where you were talking about Elise. Please update soon.
12/2/2008 c3 thosetocome
I really didn't mean to be cheesy by saying keep up the good work a million times by the way, haha sorry about that.
12/2/2008 c3 thosetocome
I relate to Ames in some ways, so I'm interested in where you're taking this. Keep up the good work!
11/19/2008 c2 courtesylaughs
I like this. Keep up the good work (:
11/5/2008 c1 22pedrozoso
Nice short. This girl seemed very realistic to me, the way you described her internal conflicts and her social dilemmas. This piece is very complete on its own, but I can see how this can transform into chapters. Nice job =]
11/5/2008 c1 82Doxology
I like the beginning of this. Sometimes it's refreshing to just read about a character idea - a person. I hope you continue.

Cheers,

Doxology

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