for Plastic Rainbow12/29/2008 c1 
4the Italian
Interesting metaphores. I couldn't tell if you were describing an orphanage or some kind of medical facility, but that hardly subtracts from the experience.
4the ItalianInteresting metaphores. I couldn't tell if you were describing an orphanage or some kind of medical facility, but that hardly subtracts from the experience.
11/8/2008 c1 23Lithium of Mercy
Interesting piece. I think more descriptive work would have been nice for the after affects of the child's abandonment, but it's alright as is.
23Lithium of MercyInteresting piece. I think more descriptive work would have been nice for the after affects of the child's abandonment, but it's alright as is.