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2Elephant Hunter
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Why are you leaving me with only this?! It was great!
*cries* I wanted to read it! WAHHHH!
But, seriously, awesome story! I loved the idea, I hope you get time to finish it!
2Elephant Hunter...
Why are you leaving me with only this?! It was great!
*cries* I wanted to read it! WAHHHH!
But, seriously, awesome story! I loved the idea, I hope you get time to finish it!
5/2/2011 c3 2Love-Comes-In-Many-Forms
Why don't you post it, but then re-write the whole thing? If these are the original firs chapters I'd love to see the rest of the story. Because what you claim to be sucky is probably actually really good. A writer almost ALWAYS disses/dislikes his/her writing. I knw I do, but people say that it's good so why shouldn't I believe them? Just post it back up PLEASE!
2Love-Comes-In-Many-FormsWhy don't you post it, but then re-write the whole thing? If these are the original firs chapters I'd love to see the rest of the story. Because what you claim to be sucky is probably actually really good. A writer almost ALWAYS disses/dislikes his/her writing. I knw I do, but people say that it's good so why shouldn't I believe them? Just post it back up PLEASE!
12/28/2010 c3 PenmanshipSmitten88
well from what I've read in the first three chapters, it is pretty good.
I think that you should continue it. I like the character Frankie...
Maybe you should work on the characterisation of Hayden...
Yeah thats it...
well from what I've read in the first three chapters, it is pretty good.
I think that you should continue it. I like the character Frankie...
Maybe you should work on the characterisation of Hayden...
Yeah thats it...
11/25/2010 c2 Mandyg
This is going to be a great story.
Why does it say complete.
Please update soon.
Thanks
Mandy
This is going to be a great story.
Why does it say complete.
Please update soon.
Thanks
Mandy
11/22/2010 c2 2WinterInk24
Hehe. Hayden is funny. I can't wait for more awkward situations between him and Allie. Also wondering if this story is actually completed. That would make me very sad to never know what kind of revenge Hayden has in store. Great writing. Great characters. They all have a distinct personality. Update soon please! :D
2WinterInk24Hehe. Hayden is funny. I can't wait for more awkward situations between him and Allie. Also wondering if this story is actually completed. That would make me very sad to never know what kind of revenge Hayden has in store. Great writing. Great characters. They all have a distinct personality. Update soon please! :D
11/11/2010 c2 1XxDragon-TwinsxX
I love this story
even if it only has two chapters so far...
anyways, I hope you update quickly!
1XxDragon-TwinsxXI love this story
even if it only has two chapters so far...
anyways, I hope you update quickly!
9/5/2010 c1 35SeaJade Song
i think its pretty rockish! (anything with an ish for me makes it better just saying)
35SeaJade Songi think its pretty rockish! (anything with an ish for me makes it better just saying)
6/16/2010 c1 Crankygal
Hi i chance upon this story and it is very gd just by looking at chapter one, did you take it down? Is there anyway you will repost the story please?
Thanks
Crankygal
Hi i chance upon this story and it is very gd just by looking at chapter one, did you take it down? Is there anyway you will repost the story please?
Thanks
Crankygal
6/14/2010 c1 5Nell09
umm I really like what I ve read so far but I can only see 1 chapter posted and its not looking like its completed so I m wondering whether its only 1 ch or not, great charecters!
5Nell09umm I really like what I ve read so far but I can only see 1 chapter posted and its not looking like its completed so I m wondering whether its only 1 ch or not, great charecters!
1/2/2010 c24 Vicky A
Are we going to read a sequal in the near future? With the possibility of Julian being the main character, perhaps?
Are we going to read a sequal in the near future? With the possibility of Julian being the main character, perhaps?