for He was Cool5/30/2009 c23 
6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTIC
aww i like that ending! it was a happy ending but not so cliche cause he was leaving! well it was a good story, great job!
6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTICaww i like that ending! it was a happy ending but not so cliche cause he was leaving! well it was a good story, great job!
5/30/2009 c23 2literati papier
aww. the story was really awesome and interesting. i like the stupid words that Frankie always said. haha, :)
2literati papieraww. the story was really awesome and interesting. i like the stupid words that Frankie always said. haha, :)
5/30/2009 c4 Anon
It doesn't cost nearly that much for repairs. It's a little unrealistic for someone to pay $12,0 for that car damage. If Josh's door only banged against Hayden's car, it wouldn't leave enough damage to warrant that much for repairs. Colliding while they were driving, sure, but not if both cars were parked.
It doesn't cost nearly that much for repairs. It's a little unrealistic for someone to pay $12,0 for that car damage. If Josh's door only banged against Hayden's car, it wouldn't leave enough damage to warrant that much for repairs. Colliding while they were driving, sure, but not if both cars were parked.
5/30/2009 c23 tickle582
NO
it can't end like this i mean i know they exchanged the i love you's and everything but they are separated... :(
but i love them together and besides that it was an awesome story
i think you should make an epilogue chp.
thankx
~abby~
NO
it can't end like this i mean i know they exchanged the i love you's and everything but they are separated... :(
but i love them together and besides that it was an awesome story
i think you should make an epilogue chp.
thankx
~abby~
5/29/2009 c23 3Floppy125
I loved the story! Though, to be honest, I didn't like the end. I like happy endings. But PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! Loved the story :)
3Floppy125I loved the story! Though, to be honest, I didn't like the end. I like happy endings. But PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! Loved the story :)
5/29/2009 c23 notyourbiz
heck yeah ! He's so super duper cool, isn't he? Wow I can't believe its actually over. Well, i liked how it ends! It wasn't all fairytale because he was leaving but it wasn't tragedy because he'll be back some day. Thank you so very much for writing such a wonderful story! U are a really great writer and I hope that you will continue to write as good as you have with this story. HUGS!
heck yeah ! He's so super duper cool, isn't he? Wow I can't believe its actually over. Well, i liked how it ends! It wasn't all fairytale because he was leaving but it wasn't tragedy because he'll be back some day. Thank you so very much for writing such a wonderful story! U are a really great writer and I hope that you will continue to write as good as you have with this story. HUGS!
5/29/2009 c23 1pamperedwitch
Aw i liked it!
The ending made me happy
hehehe
and they lived mostly happily ever after
1pamperedwitchAw i liked it!
The ending made me happy
hehehe
and they lived mostly happily ever after
5/29/2009 c23 Typically Cliche
Yay its completed great job i loved the suspense in the story and the ending.
"Don't just say it. Do it."
Realy great job.
Yay its completed great job i loved the suspense in the story and the ending.
"Don't just say it. Do it."
Realy great job.
5/29/2009 c23 cerulean sea
Woot! I can't wait for the epilogue. :] Thanks for writing this story. It was a pleasure to read.
Woot! I can't wait for the epilogue. :] Thanks for writing this story. It was a pleasure to read.
5/29/2009 c23 8maiff
That was awesome. I'm glad those knotty problems were straightened. And I loved the ending... it's like promising a sequel. Kidding! But I hope you do write one. :) Notify me if ever. Okay?
xD Lorena
8maiffThat was awesome. I'm glad those knotty problems were straightened. And I loved the ending... it's like promising a sequel. Kidding! But I hope you do write one. :) Notify me if ever. Okay?
xD Lorena
5/27/2009 c22 geminibaby6789
No! Why? Poor Allie. By the way, who is that woman in the hospital? Is it Hayden's mother or someone related to Hayden? Can't wait for the next one! Update soon! :)
No! Why? Poor Allie. By the way, who is that woman in the hospital? Is it Hayden's mother or someone related to Hayden? Can't wait for the next one! Update soon! :)
5/27/2009 c22 notyourbiz
What?But, why? This story will not end like this! I know you say theres more chapters, but i'm already anticipating a sequel! Consider writing one,please. What's up with Hayden anyway? What happened, one minute he was all I missed you and the next He's lke It's over! Arrgghh! Why is he doing this? Update soon!... or else! JK JK!
What?But, why? This story will not end like this! I know you say theres more chapters, but i'm already anticipating a sequel! Consider writing one,please. What's up with Hayden anyway? What happened, one minute he was all I missed you and the next He's lke It's over! Arrgghh! Why is he doing this? Update soon!... or else! JK JK!