for Temptation11/24/2008 c1 
17Unique1952
Very nice. I really like how you were able to keep a consistent rhyme scheme throughout this poem as well as how your choice of words, which by the way illustrated your emotions very well. Once again, nice work with this, I think its really good.
17Unique1952Very nice. I really like how you were able to keep a consistent rhyme scheme throughout this poem as well as how your choice of words, which by the way illustrated your emotions very well. Once again, nice work with this, I think its really good.