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11/8/2008 c1 7Kackex
Well done, you give a momentary hope to people who in their love lives broken up, yet having the hope you might give them to pull it back together! Very discriptive, wonderful adaptation of a adolescent's point of view at a perspective of romance, yet well done 4/5, hope to see more works of yours.
11/8/2008 c1 River-NZ
This seems interesting..I'd like to see more =]

Your writing is good too, there were a couple of sentences that could probably be reworked, like this one "Thoughts needing to be sorted out frantically scrambled around until coming to an abrupt stop." But otherwise it was good.

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