
11/10/2008 c20
8princessbleachhead
tears, tears
great story, i loved this story
bless them.
both of them where inlove all along.
great ending

tears, tears
great story, i loved this story
bless them.
both of them where inlove all along.
great ending
11/10/2008 c1 princessbleachhead
i like the first chapter
your stories are similar. but always good to read.
i like the first chapter
your stories are similar. but always good to read.
11/8/2008 c20
1lover or hater
i liked it but the plot seemed to go this way and that just try to stay on the same line. i do it alot when im writing in my notebook my friends will be all like what tis happend and this hapoend and then this happened... i say well this sounded better and i wanteed this to be there.. its crazy but i have ot work on it to.. but any i loved it *smiles and shrugs*

i liked it but the plot seemed to go this way and that just try to stay on the same line. i do it alot when im writing in my notebook my friends will be all like what tis happend and this hapoend and then this happened... i say well this sounded better and i wanteed this to be there.. its crazy but i have ot work on it to.. but any i loved it *smiles and shrugs*