for The Beating of Their Own Drums2/22/2010 c5 
2me. yes. me
Ohmygod you have to update! I loved it so far =] It was very well-written and well-executed and I like the characters, though there are too many of them so it gets confusing! Still, I've kind of got who each of them are by now. It's been like, a year since this has been updated though... And I really wanna know what happens next so, update? Please? :)
2me. yes. meOhmygod you have to update! I loved it so far =] It was very well-written and well-executed and I like the characters, though there are too many of them so it gets confusing! Still, I've kind of got who each of them are by now. It's been like, a year since this has been updated though... And I really wanna know what happens next so, update? Please? :)
3/30/2009 c1 Counting Petals
I find all of the characters interesting so far - there's such a wide array of them. It was a lot to take in at once, though, but I imagine we'll get into them more as the story progresses and hopefully get all the dirt. Love this story so far =)
I find all of the characters interesting so far - there's such a wide array of them. It was a lot to take in at once, though, but I imagine we'll get into them more as the story progresses and hopefully get all the dirt. Love this story so far =)
1/30/2009 c1 2Seliena Winter
Although your writing is very good,the nicknames for the characters are confusing and in my opinion not realistic.
-Jenn Black
P.S. Thanks for reviewing Unstable!
2Seliena WinterAlthough your writing is very good,the nicknames for the characters are confusing and in my opinion not realistic.
-Jenn Black
P.S. Thanks for reviewing Unstable!
1/6/2009 c5 silvaaeterna
Back again, after quite a long while..
I'm liking this, Charlotte is snarky. And totally getting in over her head. XD
I'm actually really curious to know more about (the male) Blake. I know that so far he's only been a vessel for gossip, but considering the end of Chapter 4... I don't know, he seems interesting to me. *shrugs*
And I left you a FREAKING LONG rate on Muse Bunny, so I'm sure you'll forgive this review being short and useless. :P
~Emma, who is quite good to her minions. ^_^
Back again, after quite a long while..
I'm liking this, Charlotte is snarky. And totally getting in over her head. XD
I'm actually really curious to know more about (the male) Blake. I know that so far he's only been a vessel for gossip, but considering the end of Chapter 4... I don't know, he seems interesting to me. *shrugs*
And I left you a FREAKING LONG rate on Muse Bunny, so I'm sure you'll forgive this review being short and useless. :P
~Emma, who is quite good to her minions. ^_^
12/22/2008 c1 10Aurora Corona
Woow! Hot, hot, hot beginning! I'm melting here, and it's like... 15 degrees Celcius or something :P
'Cause it's really late on my side of the world, and I'm uber tired, I only read half of this, so I'm comin back to it later; that's why I added it to my favorites :D
So far so good, detail: cool. I read the word cascade (describing hair stuff) more than once in the first part I read, there are synonyms I think... Like flow, and um... Check :D
Hm. Great potential I think. I like it so far... xD
Well... Good job!
I feel like Z right now -_-
haha random, okay... erh...
Keep updating! :]
Love,
curse the stars.
10Aurora CoronaWoow! Hot, hot, hot beginning! I'm melting here, and it's like... 15 degrees Celcius or something :P
'Cause it's really late on my side of the world, and I'm uber tired, I only read half of this, so I'm comin back to it later; that's why I added it to my favorites :D
So far so good, detail: cool. I read the word cascade (describing hair stuff) more than once in the first part I read, there are synonyms I think... Like flow, and um... Check :D
Hm. Great potential I think. I like it so far... xD
Well... Good job!
I feel like Z right now -_-
haha random, okay... erh...
Keep updating! :]
Love,
curse the stars.
12/21/2008 c5 ilykshopping
i just know charlotte's gonna do something illegal. at least i hope. lol
i just know charlotte's gonna do something illegal. at least i hope. lol
12/21/2008 c5 3Charon-dragon
really who do you care about the next chapter is about blake but after that?...
3Charon-dragonreally who do you care about the next chapter is about blake but after that?...
12/21/2008 c1 meduse
wow...this chapter was LONG and DETAILED...
probably one of the better things i have read so far on fictionpress...
keep writing :)
~DixieAusten
wow...this chapter was LONG and DETAILED...
probably one of the better things i have read so far on fictionpress...
keep writing :)
~DixieAusten
12/20/2008 c1 19toffeecakesxox
Wow, very dramatic beginning. I. Love. It. :D Normally, I wouldn't read this, but I'm officially interested.
-toffeecakesxox.
19toffeecakesxoxWow, very dramatic beginning. I. Love. It. :D Normally, I wouldn't read this, but I'm officially interested.
-toffeecakesxox.
12/20/2008 c4 notyourbiz
ah wat da fck this is turning out to be more of a horror storie but im addicted! and the part with the time is really creepy. please please please update soon.
ah wat da fck this is turning out to be more of a horror storie but im addicted! and the part with the time is really creepy. please please please update soon.
12/20/2008 c3 silvaaeterna
I can sympathize with Joseph. I'd be trying to ignore all these crazy teenagers too. XD
I totally just pimped your fic on myspace, by the way. And will leave you something constructive on the next chappie, promise.
~Emma, whose muses will not wait another minute and so has to rush off.
I can sympathize with Joseph. I'd be trying to ignore all these crazy teenagers too. XD
I totally just pimped your fic on myspace, by the way. And will leave you something constructive on the next chappie, promise.
~Emma, whose muses will not wait another minute and so has to rush off.
12/19/2008 c3 5PurpleSnowflake
Whoa! You changed the chapters! That's fine, the first chapter was super long so I'm glad. I swear you should publish this thing, it's amazing! whaahh why can't I get this many reviewers?
5PurpleSnowflakeWhoa! You changed the chapters! That's fine, the first chapter was super long so I'm glad. I swear you should publish this thing, it's amazing! whaahh why can't I get this many reviewers?