for The Beating of Their Own Drums11/12/2008 c1 
1Annabelle Reaver
W-O-W. This thing was outrageously long, but I loved it. Reminds me of Gossip Girl, but so much different. The drama's more intense. It's a cliche theme with a sweet twist. I adore the vocabulary you've used, as well.
Keep up the good work.
1Annabelle ReaverW-O-W. This thing was outrageously long, but I loved it. Reminds me of Gossip Girl, but so much different. The drama's more intense. It's a cliche theme with a sweet twist. I adore the vocabulary you've used, as well.
Keep up the good work.
11/11/2008 c1 Kyle
look, i read the beginning of your story and i'm a big john legend fan so i think it's good and i don't think i should read the rest. what concerns me is that there's a character named kyle in the story and i don't wanna be so bold as to as to just assume you named him after me but . . . i'm perfect. if there's gonna be a kyle in your story, your story has to contain certain elements of sweetness. a few suggestions - kyle's eyes should be made of lasers, he should speak 3 languages (english, romance, and bear growls), also he should carry around a boom box on his shoulder that's constantly blasting disney channel music. you dig?
i'm just saying think about it.
look, i read the beginning of your story and i'm a big john legend fan so i think it's good and i don't think i should read the rest. what concerns me is that there's a character named kyle in the story and i don't wanna be so bold as to as to just assume you named him after me but . . . i'm perfect. if there's gonna be a kyle in your story, your story has to contain certain elements of sweetness. a few suggestions - kyle's eyes should be made of lasers, he should speak 3 languages (english, romance, and bear growls), also he should carry around a boom box on his shoulder that's constantly blasting disney channel music. you dig?
i'm just saying think about it.
11/11/2008 c1 5PurpleSnowflake
OH. MY. GOSH. it was so long, but i read all of it. and im glad i did, because it was awesome! not even lying, possibly one of the best fictionpress stories i've read. and i've read a lot. be honored! if you don't update this soon, i shall come and find you. gr. i love the way it's all deep and dark and sexy and bitchy and there's murders going on at the same time! to sum it up in one word: frickin' awesome. okay that was two words. w/e.
5PurpleSnowflakeOH. MY. GOSH. it was so long, but i read all of it. and im glad i did, because it was awesome! not even lying, possibly one of the best fictionpress stories i've read. and i've read a lot. be honored! if you don't update this soon, i shall come and find you. gr. i love the way it's all deep and dark and sexy and bitchy and there's murders going on at the same time! to sum it up in one word: frickin' awesome. okay that was two words. w/e.