for Something Unexpected11/19/2011 c1 
7drats
Nice intro, the end of the chapter certainly left a nice "boom, this is my story, enjoy" feel to it, if that makes any sense whatsoever. Okay, ill keep reading now...
7dratsNice intro, the end of the chapter certainly left a nice "boom, this is my story, enjoy" feel to it, if that makes any sense whatsoever. Okay, ill keep reading now...
11/17/2011 c31 sophiesing
I liked the story and it was well written for the most part but it had a couple of holes. First the incident you stated in the chapter where they broke into the school that it had happened on school grounds, but when Callum explains it, it seems that she was at his house not the school?
Also there were alot of little grammatical errors such as using made instead of mad, missing words sometimes etc.
Otherwise the plot was pretty good, the characters were pretty well developed except for Heather, you may have went too over the top with her jealousy. Callum's character was very good though, I liked how at the beginning he was so different and he slowely started to change, as did Andy. She's still shy, but speaks alot more.
It was a good story!
I liked the story and it was well written for the most part but it had a couple of holes. First the incident you stated in the chapter where they broke into the school that it had happened on school grounds, but when Callum explains it, it seems that she was at his house not the school?
Also there were alot of little grammatical errors such as using made instead of mad, missing words sometimes etc.
Otherwise the plot was pretty good, the characters were pretty well developed except for Heather, you may have went too over the top with her jealousy. Callum's character was very good though, I liked how at the beginning he was so different and he slowely started to change, as did Andy. She's still shy, but speaks alot more.
It was a good story!
4/23/2011 c5 cody
i really hate andy's personality.
i really hate andy's personality.
3/2/2011 c31 Barbie826
There were things I liked about this story and it did make me curious on what would happen next.
Although if someone just stopped talking to me over a boy, and they're my friend, I wouldn't forgive them so easily.
I enjoyed the story up until the Jake part and her being kidnapped. I was more interested in her and Callum and the girls, then that stuff. Seemed pretty unrealistic.
There were things I liked about this story and it did make me curious on what would happen next.
Although if someone just stopped talking to me over a boy, and they're my friend, I wouldn't forgive them so easily.
I enjoyed the story up until the Jake part and her being kidnapped. I was more interested in her and Callum and the girls, then that stuff. Seemed pretty unrealistic.
5/29/2010 c17 RandomReviewer
sorry, but heather is really starting to annoy me. i mean she actually told andy that she stole callum from her, when she never ever had callum in the first place! also, callum is not an object that can be stolen, he is a person. i hate sexisim for guys just as much as girls(im a girl). i hope heather goes back to her cool self soon, even though it would take some time for me to forgive her for being so terrible to jordan, i sincerly didnt think she would be THAT kind of person. the only thing i dont like about this story is that it has such bad grammar, but i can live with it, and i wont excpect the author to spend forever spell checking, she works hard enough to get this story out. i just hope someday in the future that she will go through this story again and fix all of the mistakes. wow, this is the longest review ive ever written, for this story and all the other stories ive reviewed. either way you are an awsome author, like ive said in every review. 10 stars out of 5!
sorry, but heather is really starting to annoy me. i mean she actually told andy that she stole callum from her, when she never ever had callum in the first place! also, callum is not an object that can be stolen, he is a person. i hate sexisim for guys just as much as girls(im a girl). i hope heather goes back to her cool self soon, even though it would take some time for me to forgive her for being so terrible to jordan, i sincerly didnt think she would be THAT kind of person. the only thing i dont like about this story is that it has such bad grammar, but i can live with it, and i wont excpect the author to spend forever spell checking, she works hard enough to get this story out. i just hope someday in the future that she will go through this story again and fix all of the mistakes. wow, this is the longest review ive ever written, for this story and all the other stories ive reviewed. either way you are an awsome author, like ive said in every review. 10 stars out of 5!
5/28/2010 c14 RandomReviewer
im starting to get a habit of reviewing every other chapeter of this story. i like how callum seems to treat andy differently than he does other girls. i'm sorta annoyed that skye thinks that callum is up to something just because he acts differently with andy, even though she is most probably right. i really want to see another love intrest to come in for andy, just to see how callum would react to it. either way, still loving this story, please keep writing stories! your an awsome author!
im starting to get a habit of reviewing every other chapeter of this story. i like how callum seems to treat andy differently than he does other girls. i'm sorta annoyed that skye thinks that callum is up to something just because he acts differently with andy, even though she is most probably right. i really want to see another love intrest to come in for andy, just to see how callum would react to it. either way, still loving this story, please keep writing stories! your an awsome author!
5/28/2010 c11 RandomReviewer
i am loving this story more and more! i really hope that at some point another love intrest for andy will come up, and andy actually liking him. i cant say i am a big fan of callum, seeing he is an egotistical ass, but i have a feeling he isnt that bad. im also curious about a few other things. example, heather and jordan, jordan's girlfriend(whose name escapes me at the moment), what is up with jake and callum, sarah and callum making out, and finally what happened on andy's disasterous date in australia. love this story! give it 6 stars out of 5!
i am loving this story more and more! i really hope that at some point another love intrest for andy will come up, and andy actually liking him. i cant say i am a big fan of callum, seeing he is an egotistical ass, but i have a feeling he isnt that bad. im also curious about a few other things. example, heather and jordan, jordan's girlfriend(whose name escapes me at the moment), what is up with jake and callum, sarah and callum making out, and finally what happened on andy's disasterous date in australia. love this story! give it 6 stars out of 5!
5/28/2010 c10 RandomReviewer
oh my gosh, this is like my second review on this story! i never do more than one review or none! i love this story! it is pretty amazing. i have a few theories about what happened to andy, about that "date" she had when she was in austrailia. you know the one that she mentions every once in a while, how she says she wasn't going to think about it. i have very high excpectations of this story. you are an amazing author! after i am done this story i am most definetly going to try your other stories!
oh my gosh, this is like my second review on this story! i never do more than one review or none! i love this story! it is pretty amazing. i have a few theories about what happened to andy, about that "date" she had when she was in austrailia. you know the one that she mentions every once in a while, how she says she wasn't going to think about it. i have very high excpectations of this story. you are an amazing author! after i am done this story i am most definetly going to try your other stories!
5/28/2010 c7 RandomReviewer
i know that this story is completed and everything, but i hope that jake is the type of guy that makes andy weak in the knees. you know, tall, dark, and handsome(totally my type as well). i think it would be funny to see how callum would react to that and how he might get all jealous.
i know that this story is completed and everything, but i hope that jake is the type of guy that makes andy weak in the knees. you know, tall, dark, and handsome(totally my type as well). i think it would be funny to see how callum would react to that and how he might get all jealous.
3/31/2010 c31 Anara Celebvilya
That was an amazing story. And, no, I'm not just saying that to make you feel good. There were a lot of missing words, commas, and periods, but the storyline was excellent, and it was easy to ignore any mistakes that cropped up.
Thanks for a superb read!
That was an amazing story. And, no, I'm not just saying that to make you feel good. There were a lot of missing words, commas, and periods, but the storyline was excellent, and it was easy to ignore any mistakes that cropped up.
Thanks for a superb read!
1/29/2010 c31 Sunneva
Think you to! ;D
Great end in this story! Love it! And think you for giving me your email. I am so happy that you wan´t to help me write! I love to write but i can´t enjoy it if me brain freezes all the time I don´t know what to write, so thank you again!
I´m looking forward to read your new story, but one question first.. Where can I find it? ^^, On you webside? I will check on it where and comment you writing when I have time ;)
And thank you for chearing this beautiful story with us all. I am realy greatful!
Your reviewer Sunneva xD ;) ^-^
Think you to! ;D
Great end in this story! Love it! And think you for giving me your email. I am so happy that you wan´t to help me write! I love to write but i can´t enjoy it if me brain freezes all the time I don´t know what to write, so thank you again!
I´m looking forward to read your new story, but one question first.. Where can I find it? ^^, On you webside? I will check on it where and comment you writing when I have time ;)
And thank you for chearing this beautiful story with us all. I am realy greatful!
Your reviewer Sunneva xD ;) ^-^
1/16/2010 c14 yay
I've just started to read the story and it's got a really good storyline so far, but you should consider prrofreading it. I find that there are a lot of erroes in it like in a sentence there my might be words missing. :D
I've just started to read the story and it's got a really good storyline so far, but you should consider prrofreading it. I find that there are a lot of erroes in it like in a sentence there my might be words missing. :D
1/13/2010 c5 XxSCENEandHEARDxX
I love-love-love this story! Can't wait to read more, but I have a driving lesson to attend to.^_^
I love-love-love this story! Can't wait to read more, but I have a driving lesson to attend to.^_^