
8/29/2009 c28 ishani acuinatum.ashley
hey
this chapter was as you said, very very intriguing...i was glued to the screen the entire chapter... I was kinda scared that Jake would actually hurt Andy fatally...I do hope Andy gains her consciousness soon cuz i want to know what happens...hopefully it'll be Callum who wins the fight.
Go Callum,Go!
luv
ishani
p.s.: do do do do update soon... :D
hey
this chapter was as you said, very very intriguing...i was glued to the screen the entire chapter... I was kinda scared that Jake would actually hurt Andy fatally...I do hope Andy gains her consciousness soon cuz i want to know what happens...hopefully it'll be Callum who wins the fight.
Go Callum,Go!
luv
ishani
p.s.: do do do do update soon... :D
8/28/2009 c28 Erica71167
Great chapter! Hopefully Callum called the police before he went there. That'd be nice.
Great chapter! Hopefully Callum called the police before he went there. That'd be nice.
8/28/2009 c28
2kirstenb.0319
Well, I alwyas knew it was him that would come into the room, the story wouldn't go right if it were anybody else at the time. I can't wait to see what happens though, or whether she survives Jake's attack on her body. I think she will, but she'll be in the hospital for a few days at least.

Well, I alwyas knew it was him that would come into the room, the story wouldn't go right if it were anybody else at the time. I can't wait to see what happens though, or whether she survives Jake's attack on her body. I think she will, but she'll be in the hospital for a few days at least.
8/27/2009 c28
4LaMeO1
wow.
this chapter was so intense.
and completely heart wrenching.
i feel so helpless when i'm reading it as if i'm there
your description and writing was really great
update soon
=D

wow.
this chapter was so intense.
and completely heart wrenching.
i feel so helpless when i'm reading it as if i'm there
your description and writing was really great
update soon
=D
8/25/2009 c27 Katie
need to update immediately . also i think the next chapter should be in callum's point of view it would be good to see what he was thinking through all this.
need to update immediately . also i think the next chapter should be in callum's point of view it would be good to see what he was thinking through all this.
8/25/2009 c27 Blue Enigma
No! D;
You can't just stop right theree! And this chapter took forever -whines-
I ned to know who is there! And what happens! x.x -Dead-
No! D;
You can't just stop right theree! And this chapter took forever -whines-
I ned to know who is there! And what happens! x.x -Dead-
8/24/2009 c27 Erica71167
Awesome chapter! Man that was a bad beating, I hope Callum gives Jake a worse one.
Awesome chapter! Man that was a bad beating, I hope Callum gives Jake a worse one.
8/23/2009 c10 writerperson44
OMG! i am so loving this! lol this is so good.
OMG! i am so loving this! lol this is so good.
8/12/2009 c26 Sunneva
NEXT CHAPTER, NEXT CHAPTER!
I hope that the next chapter won´t take as long as this one!
I think that if callum loves Andy hes going to forgive her.
Andy is not going to die But when she wokes up she has no idea where she is.. (i have no idea where she could then be xD ) ANd Callum findes her somewhere, mabey at Jakes house.
I start school next week and me nerves are going crasy! My shoulders are so tense.
-Sunneva ;D ;) :)
KEEP GOING GIRL!
NEXT CHAPTER, NEXT CHAPTER!
I hope that the next chapter won´t take as long as this one!
I think that if callum loves Andy hes going to forgive her.
Andy is not going to die But when she wokes up she has no idea where she is.. (i have no idea where she could then be xD ) ANd Callum findes her somewhere, mabey at Jakes house.
I start school next week and me nerves are going crasy! My shoulders are so tense.
-Sunneva ;D ;) :)
KEEP GOING GIRL!
8/7/2009 c26 ishaniacuinatum.ashley
omg! i want to know what happens next...I'm so excited!
great chapter!please update soon
luv
ishani
xx
p.s.:i know this sounds weird and insincere, but it has been days since u last updated...so could u remind me what Jake's warning was?...i'm really sorry i dont remember!
omg! i want to know what happens next...I'm so excited!
great chapter!please update soon
luv
ishani
xx
p.s.:i know this sounds weird and insincere, but it has been days since u last updated...so could u remind me what Jake's warning was?...i'm really sorry i dont remember!