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8/29/2009 c28 ishani acuinatum.ashley

this chapter was as you said, very very intriguing...i was glued to the screen the entire chapter... I was kinda scared that Jake would actually hurt Andy fatally...I do hope Andy gains her consciousness soon cuz i want to know what happens...hopefully it'll be Callum who wins the fight.

Go Callum,Go!



p.s.: do do do do update soon... :D
8/28/2009 c28 Erica71167
Great chapter! Hopefully Callum called the police before he went there. That'd be nice.
8/28/2009 c28 2kirstenb.0319
Well, I alwyas knew it was him that would come into the room, the story wouldn't go right if it were anybody else at the time. I can't wait to see what happens though, or whether she survives Jake's attack on her body. I think she will, but she'll be in the hospital for a few days at least.
8/28/2009 c28 Blue Enigma
Wow...I just want andy and callum to be okay.and again...wow
8/27/2009 c28 4LaMeO1

this chapter was so intense.

and completely heart wrenching.

i feel so helpless when i'm reading it as if i'm there

your description and writing was really great

update soon

8/25/2009 c27 2kirstenb.0319
Ah! What are you doing? You can't end a chapter like that! Update now!
8/25/2009 c27 Katie
need to update immediately . also i think the next chapter should be in callum's point of view it would be good to see what he was thinking through all this.
8/25/2009 c27 Blue Enigma
No! D;

You can't just stop right theree! And this chapter took forever -whines-

I ned to know who is there! And what happens! x.x -Dead-
8/24/2009 c27 4LaMeO1
wow...update soon

that is such a HUGE cliffhanger!

update update update

8/24/2009 c27 Erica71167
Awesome chapter! Man that was a bad beating, I hope Callum gives Jake a worse one.
8/23/2009 c10 writerperson44
OMG! i am so loving this! lol this is so good.
8/16/2009 c26 2righthere431
(gasp) What's Jake going to do to her?
8/12/2009 c26 Sunneva

I hope that the next chapter won´t take as long as this one!

I think that if callum loves Andy hes going to forgive her.

Andy is not going to die But when she wokes up she has no idea where she is.. (i have no idea where she could then be xD ) ANd Callum findes her somewhere, mabey at Jakes house.

I start school next week and me nerves are going crasy! My shoulders are so tense.

-Sunneva ;D ;) :)

8/10/2009 c26 Erica71167
Awesome chapter! Please update!
8/7/2009 c26 ishaniacuinatum.ashley
omg! i want to know what happens next...I'm so excited!

great chapter!please update soon




p.s.:i know this sounds weird and insincere, but it has been days since u last updated...so could u remind me what Jake's warning was?...i'm really sorry i dont remember!
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