10/22/2009 c11 2Casey Drake
I like this. It's a good rewrite of an already interesting story.

:) CD

7/8/2009 c1 LULu
It's kind of confusing. With all the different point of views and stuff. Maybe you should have a couple main characters and go with that. But it seems interesting enough! Good work!

11/13/2008 c1 25Damien21
really good but there are alot of sides to the story. it is pretty easy to get lost. so just a question are all the chapters going to be like this or is it going to be split up between jake, bradley etc.?