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12/23/2008 c1 1barelyamiable
The last three lines are amazing.

The idea of the reflection plays out more than just on a mirror.

It gives your entire poem another meaning.

It turns it into a sort of monologue.

I really enjoyed reading this. (:
12/2/2008 c1 17daughterofmusic
Very, very nice. I love the little twist at the end - "get out of my mirror."

12/1/2008 c1 55OneSilverWing
I really loved the last three lines
11/17/2008 c1 Bonnie
Very good. You have really captured the frustration of being yourself and knowing that you are messing stuff up, but not being able to help it. Thank you for posting.
11/12/2008 c1 6fictionalboyfriend

The last three lines were exactly right. You pretty much put your finger on it.

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