for Healing Arms11/23/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
All your capitalization was by teh first line except "Lifeless Hanging" and "He shrugs She nods it is understood." I would change those so that they fit with the rest of the piece.
I like the middle and the left thing. It creates an interesting aspect to the piece and it works well to separate those parts. I also think your descriptions are really great, especially "That picturesque grin"... that was a great image.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon.
612simpleplan13All your capitalization was by teh first line except "Lifeless Hanging" and "He shrugs She nods it is understood." I would change those so that they fit with the rest of the piece.
I like the middle and the left thing. It creates an interesting aspect to the piece and it works well to separate those parts. I also think your descriptions are really great, especially "That picturesque grin"... that was a great image.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon.